His trance was broken when his friend shouted his name bad he had to come out of his LA LA land half heartedly.
Nian Zhen stood behind An Ning and gazed at his son with his chest twisting in pain. Parents always look out for their children. They cover their backs because that pretty much defines what parents do. However, he never expected to see his own son marching into a battle whose outcome they had no hope of ascertaining. He wanted to protest and yes, give up, for Pollux and the rest of his family's sake but he wasn't sure An Ning and Castor would come out of this alive even if he did. His crimes were too numerous. His sins even more horrendous. And his beloved woman and the son he had never ever seen until several months ago were the ones paying for his accrued IOUs with interest.
A good story with a nice plot not like other novels the romance is good not too perverted the character development is great. Just hoping the author will be able to finish it.
"A stage 4?"
They soon returned their gaze to the TV before nodding simultaneously at the same time, " it seems like there's only one thing left to do "Hua yinyue
"...How long ago did she disappear?" Pò asked out of the blue.
...okay this is getting a bit freaky now...
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"You're not supposed to mess around too much with things down there, do you intend to just carry him to the top?"
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"Death will not come unto you. Even the undead will perish someday, but not you. Your soul has nowhere to return to, bound by nothing, it was free. When your body perished, even after you used up countless bodies, your soul will drift away freely, it will be over only when it sustained enough damage to perish, and when your soul finally perished, there is no next time nor life forever."
Review after 163 chapters.I think the quality of writing is very good. The author takes care of the details, which is something to be appreciated.Nothing to say about the updates.The world background is acceptable, although I find it generic.The story development is horrible. The novel is very poorly planned. In the first 83 chapters there are two time jumps, the first of ten years and the second of eight years. These time jumps should not have been so abrupt, because events in those years that are interesting have been lost. Although the author has commented that he will do a flashback arc of the eight-year jump, said arc will only be empty chapters because all the interest has already disappeared. I don't understand why such a rush, because it diminishes the quality of a novel. Instead of jumping several years, he jumps weeks or months. Now, in 83 chapters you have an MC who is too powerful, even his time at the academy is useless. The MC system also seems too powerful.In 163 chapters, the MC hasn't had any difficult challenges. He always solves everything too easily.Attention! If the goal is for the novel to only have 300-500 chapters then I think it's justified to empower the MC so quickly.The character design is also horrible. All characters lack personality. Emotions are not transmitted to the reader through actions or conversations.Final words. I'm glad to read a novel with an elf as the protagonist, I really wanted to read a novel like that. Unfortunately this novel has aspects that have been neglected.To the author. I hope this review can help you improve as a writer. Each person has their own preferences and opinions, and it's impossible to write a novel that everyone likes. Not to mention, it seems like this is your first novel. I'm leaving you with power stones.