Às vezes a história se perde no caminho.
só pelo autor já sei que a novel é nota 10 ?
This is gonna be my first review after binge reading almost 400 chapters. The writing quality of the story is ok. You’ll find a couple of misspelled words every few chapters but it’s not enough to disrupt the reading. There is not a ton of world building in the beginning but you learn more about the world as the story goes on. There was never a time where it’s a problem. The MC is the only character worth, Cain, mentioning since no other character is really important is the only character that any significance everyone else show up for at most an arc then is no longer relevant. Which is my one knock real knock on the novel. Not really into novel where the MC is a loner who is destined to be alone. The had the romance tag which I was looking forward to but there’s no real romance in this story maybe only a glorified chapter. The MC is smart and doesn’t make any head scratching decisions so he is hard to like. There is no real character the development with all it is was developing stronger willpower. Final I can’t really speak on the update stability since I just started reading it.
A great read. It's captivating and enticing with a great and well paced storyline. I would like to continue reading this book and see how it progresses. I definitely recommend it if you'll want a good read
Eminence in shadow is fuckin peak . My 2nd most fav isekai
I am the original author of this novel, I am also the author of the original "S-RANK IN ANOTHER WORLD
Worst of the worst... congrats for anyone who hasnt read this sh#tThe MC has no brain, the author doesnt use a logic in the story.If u insist to read, then... yeah
This is a interesting(boyLove) take on being reborn. I find it funny. Ues, the writing in some places is a little rough in someplaces(not that I can talk) but it is far from terrible. So the author is on wattpad thats cool I will have to check her out..My rating for is four star because that is my personal opinion. I have to finish reading to see if I need to change my feeling but I am wishing it good luck.???
Author here, hence the shameless 5 star rating. Quick disclaimer like many of the other authors out there, this is my first novel. Please be gentle ;). But in all seriousness, I'm here to improve on my writing and hopefully bring you some joy with what I'm attempting the produce with this novel.Please feel free to leave as many comments, criticisms, and suggestions as you'd like. I take these very seriously and hope to grow along the way.
Seriously tho I have meet down syndromes that make more sense. Hahaaaahhha this is a joke. Stop deleting my reviews they are 100% accurate and would save a lot other peoples time
I cannot follow the story at all becuase the grammar is so terrible, I read out to chapter 10 see if improved at all I did not. The only way to make this story readable is to fix the grammar in it
the story was ok at first but then mc starts to have negative iq and retardation syndrome around ch 45 and 52 which pretty much ruin the story via author forcing situations that is uncharacteristic of the mc which only leads me to think its beta mc and dummy mc furthermore when mc is in building he doesn't even make smart decisions like why would he now think about his status screen first omg i don't wanna think about more things that's wrong with the mc the more i think the more i realize was stupid things that he did in the story READ THIS IF YOU HAVE NOTHING ELSE *shrugs*