Yes! Finally found an amazing novel of my favourite apocalypse genre!! Writing quality is excellent and so is the story development. A pity that the updates are slow, but it’s understandable since all authors have their own real lives to deal with.P.s. Just ignore those 1 star haters. In fact, the majority of the novels on Qidian Webnovel do not deserve 1 stars no matter how bad their novels are. Even those readers who have complaints about the stories are respectful enough not to do so. Those haters are just bitter that they can’t write for sh*t, so they try to vent their fustrations on others. How laughable...
This is definitely a hidden gem. Though it has an op protagonist, it uses it in a very good way. Definitely read this if you like a novel with gaming elements and a lazy but powerful protagonist.
Loved the story just read it all in one go love the work. We need more chapters and world background needs to be developed and needs some work otherwise it's a good read
This ha more than 1.7Million votes and webnovel has not picked it, purest example of how your vote does not matter to webnovel, and that in the end only webnovel has the final say
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This does not have a soul; it’s empty.It feel like I can’t immerse myself in it.Filler filler filler filler filler filler filler filler
Ok m done with this... The mc literally does nothing.... All the matters are taken care of by little loli... Mc has no presence.... Loli may as well be the mc... He can create a character and try to gain a legacy... No he does nothing.. He just leeches off of the loli.. This novel is a big disappointment... Its like so on so does this does that... And mc just watching doin nothing... Any problem? Loli wil take care if it.. Loli literally says mc is useless.. Still he does nothing abt it... If u want q novel where mc has 0 presence and where mc does nothing and just watches other ppl doing ****... Then this is the novel for u.. Or dont waste ur time on this
k... the novel is fine but there are a lot of things to improve on it, starting with.1. Its been a while now since a lot of people point out that you wrote 28 years old in chapter 1 when it should be 18 and it still hasnt been fixed despite you thanking a reader for pointing it out and its been months!!!!.2.world announcements as sometimes it shows the level of the monster, others, it dosnt. Its important for the level to be known as its a difference killing a lvl 10 boss while being same level than killing it while being lvl 30 for example.3.At the start, it was said that the time was twice as long in the game but then it was said that it was only 12 hours longer and then it got increased that 1 real-world day is 2 days inside which is what was said from the start.....3. the stats of Amanda in the game are way to high for someone level 7, her stats are 119 in total - 30 stats per level - 60 stats supposing she got all 10 like shadow = 29... Meaning her equipment adds 29 points to her stats in total, thats way to much...... either its that way, she got more than 10 in stats at the start or you messed that up.4. It bothers me a lot the start of the novel with Shadow and Amanda having to run for accidentally instantly killing the senator's son by making him trip on a rock... even if that was enough to damage his head it won't be enough to instantly kill the guy unless he was to fall on his head from a few meters and im sure that he could have reached the hospital alive even if he were to die from bleeding inside the head.4. it wasnt stated how the gang found out that mc "killed" the rich guy son.5. how come Amanda was working full time as the boss of a restaurant if she was THAT good in the game and she could earn thousands dollars... dosnt makes sense and she is even higher level than MC and he is OP6. Amanda's friend Jeny seems to be from a powerful family, how come she couldn't help Amanda from the rich guy? From what i can see, Jeny could have helped Amanda with no problems 7. how is it possible for a normal guy and girl to escape a hunt from a criminal gang plus the justice for killing a person, not to mention the senator's son!!!, the pair would captured fast and easy as they had a criminal organization and the government searching for them.... and even him becoming a high paid assassin while doing so lol... where did he even get the money for that!!9. The mc calls little girl the sister of his friend but she is 18 years old, same age as the mc.... LOL10. why he didnt buy a helmet for Tina? the sister of his best friend?11. The mc wants money but as soon as he gets a new equipment he tosses the one he had out! lol, he can sell those!12. Not much is known about the classes, not even the assasin class as what they can or cant do... Such as use 1 or 2 daggers13. No world announcement was given when the mc CREATED a skill... you would think that such an amazing thing would create a world annoucement but nothing happened...All things considered, this leads me to believe that you dont have any guide while writing this nor you are keeping track of things. Its likely that you must go back to read what you wrote on X chapter to remember instead of writing down important things on a separate file. I recommend using excel or google sheets to keep track of thingsK... try to improve the world background a little and give some more physycal description of your characters. Pls be consistent with the information given
This is one of the novels that start of not too great(it was good enough for me to keep reading and author was pretty much inexperienced back then), but becomes much better later on. It's also unlike most of the cliche stuff out there in this app. You want my honest opinion? It's not that this novel doesn't deserve webnovel but webnovel doesn't deserve it. It's that good.
It's just typical transmigration story like other stories in Webnovel.MC get back to the past, have beautiful females on his side, bullied, learning superb skills that only he knowsIt's just so-so in my opinion
They really took it off the trials... Come on webnovel!Good book, premise is basically MC transmigrates, cultivates to Golden Core then dies and gets a system. Clan/Sect management. Interesting characters and the world building is pretty nice.If you want to continue reading, head over to MTLNovel. Sad I can't read a properly translated version but I guess that's Qidian for you.
Honestly love the book, and it’s really unfortunate that the ending was extremely rushed.Also, it’s like the author completely forgot about the MC’s other women…