hello author-san, I am a new reader of your work... despite all of the hate comments, I am gonna read your work. well.... everyone has a bad day and I had the worst so how bad it can be.. right??
I love the story and its side characters especially the Wizards. it reminds me of Warlock of the Magus World. I love how the MC is starting to feel like a father with him being a father of 2 daughters and the creator of the world Maria. I want to know what the Antqueen in the early chapters is up to when she got out of the Maria World but maybe it's still in the later chapters. All in all a good novel for me when you want to feel like a God.I think the only bad thing is the slow update and with the privelege thing going on and it looks like its not updating.
How can so many writing mistakes be made in just one sentence... I feel like I will find out if I keep reading, which I will not. Why the hell are the random capitalizations and some sentences don't start with one? I don't care about the story quality because my attention is taken by the writing mistakes.
Honestly one of the best books I've read on this site, this book doesn't get the recognition it deserves. Characters are very deep yet relatable at the same time and it has a very well put together an interesting world with a magic system that has been well thought out and realistic. It has a beauty to it that just kind of plays on the tragedy and dignity of the human condition. Short version read this book.
Well this story had a lot of promise...Unfortunately the author seems like a giant flake, he ended up abandoning 2 of his stories. What really angered me is the fact that this author has no explanation or heads up that he was going on hiatus/quitting. Very bad form sir, which is unfortunate because this story had a lot of promise.
An interesting take on a game world and its mechanics. The 'balanced fortunes' system (for lack of a better name) that the world has is a surprising new take on how a game may be designed, at least in my reading/playing experience. A smidge concerned about the state of the MC and his life, both past and rebirth, but that is hopefully just due to a lack of current exposition detailing it at this stage of the writing. Overall this novel has gotten me intrigued and I am looking forward to watching as it grows.
Why? Why Bai Qiuran's novel is translated again?...............................................................................................................
Its a nice read but it neads heawy editing.it's realy raw. There are a lot of details that i cant be sure what it is but if you edit it a bit i can write you a good review.
I need to improve my writing and the transitioning between characters and knowing when to stop and start sentences , over all I think the plot would be good because I have a plan but I need Improve on my writing style .
i don't see dungeon building but i wait and i want more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more
This is a good read, it's a Chinese novel down to its core but at the very least it's racism isn't annoying or whatnot but instead turned into racism but with comedyThe only problems so far for me is the occasional typos but aside from that it's a good read
People are going to say my taste for webnovel are bad... But idc I enjoy these type of novels but not just these. Maybe there are repetitive lines or plots or cliques but they are satisfying and anyone can enjoy just passing some time reading this.