???A good book. Very lengthy chapters. and alot of content. overall a good concept.The reader is unable to catch a glance of the book by just reading the synopsis. lol.
write more chapters baby your doing really well ❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤
The translation is good but the story development is going too fast the mc is growing stronger to fast and he is also too kind by giving away his system technique to another for no reason at all.
Wow, all reviews are 5 stars. Hard to believe it so I'll gonna add this story to my library for now then wait for the chapters to grow into hundreds then read. I really hate when I'm have been left hanging when I'm already so into the story just because there are only few chapters. :D
me encanta es satisfactoria la historia como en el arco de la mama que sufria trata de personas al final volvio con sus hijas y mc me encantó la comedia y la personalidad de MC adoro al que subió esta bovela porque yo la queria leer en español y no me dejava en su pagina pero esta esta mas avanzada y puedo traducirla a español (soy mala en ingles la tradusco con chome)
A story with a disguised karma system given to a fool of a MC. So one would expect a light comedy from this story.
It is probably worth checking it out, but, for me, the MC doesn't manage to give me even the smallest of smiles much less earn my reading time.
I have read too little a quantity of chapters to get a good feel of it. Who knows how it will develop?
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I didn't expect that story will be like this. In other words, I enjoy it.[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
Keep on your writing to make your readers enjoy your story. There's nothing to say more.
The characters. Ah yes, the characters. It frustrates me to no end that we have such a dumb MC. Every. Single, Fucking. Time. He always chooses the worse option. Always does something unnecessary. Always. That’s why I’m dropping this novel. Though the writing itself is good.
I am quite impressed, one of the best cultivation novels out there.
1. The MC is quite a character. The first few chapters show his gentle, caring nature then is slowly developing into something unique.
2. The prologue gives us the worldview and seems quite interesting.
3. The plot right from the start is quite a catch. It is trapping readers.
4. The character dialogue feels so natural and I love it.
5. It's only the beginning and the novel is showing shows much potential hope Author keeps up the good work.
I have no comments on this because it’s just WOW.
Tbh I could never write well like this with so much description of each person and world.
And I love the fact that you put pics for readers to easily imagine the description.
I'm not good at making superb review but I will recommend this masterpiece though the the other grammar is not capable with other sentences. I will support you. Hehe salamat sa iyo? that's a thank you for Filipino word right?