Here is my honest review!
First is the translation quality: It's average, but the word choice is quite good. I enjoy reading it. It's good even if it's average.
Stability of Updates: Don't know yet. This novel is still in trial read. We will probably get 14 chapters/week if this novel gets picked.
Story development: The story is unique even if it's a system genre. I can't comment on that. I can't call it cliché either. The pacing of the story is good. Not slow and not too rushed. Not too much attention on details and you will have a sense of progression as you read the chapters. There are unexpected moments and you can look forward to what will happen in the future chapters. This is talented level.
Character Design: Characters with personality. I like it. We also have character details. I know how the characters look. The author gave me just enough details. Very well balanced. The MC is interesting. He's badass, cool and a good looking scum. His personality is charismatic. You can't find another one like him.
World Background: It's a modern world with cultivators and beasts. Yes, it's a very used world, but that's okay. This type of world suits this type of story so I don't have a problem. It's not a detailed world either. World Background is probably the weakest aspect of this novel. As I said, the novel doesn't focus much on details, especially not on world details.
My evaluation: A super balanced story with very good characters. The author doesn't dwell much on details, but we get a story with a good flow. The biggest strength of this novel is the MC and the natural flow. A good balance between comedy and seriousness. Let's hope that the quality will stay the same even after the novel gets picked. Most of the readers will like this story. I can guarantee it. Not everyone though.
I hope this review helped you understand a few things about this novel.
Honestly, I feel like it's one of the best magical realism I've ever read on trial. I'm a fan of these types of novels.
Idk, I like the idea of the book.
However, I just find it really annoying that random ass people just come up to his place and take stuff etc etc.
Like idk it's like these people do nothing and just take things from his place... I just find this so fcking annoying.
For me, the mc HAS to have some self-respect about himself. There is being kind and then there is grovelling to others, letting them walk all over you etc. This is what the mc is in this book and it is something I cannot stand reading about.
Like I don't mind that people come to his place, maybe get to look at stuff etc but to actively take things without even doing anything? That's over the line, there's a difference to looking around admiring compared to taking things. It's like inviting someone to your house and them just taking things from it... Nah, can't stand that. the mc also has to have certain self-respect, some confidence about that he lacks.
Hope this makes sense? Just something I want to read about when reading so yeah. My prefrence rly
Pretty bland and boring novel with a world that doesn't make much sense. Don't know why such bad novels are selected.
Mc is fairly 2d and side characters all react in illogical ways
author, please move this to the fanfic section. you will be forced to move later on anyway, best to do it now.
i havent read it yet, im just here to tellbyou this.
For me it's awesome novel
The story development really my cup of tea
The comedy, romance, character interaction everything is really good (except mc denseness but i quite like it)
And once again author, NO NTR
MC is either the grandpa or the granddaughter
Anyways grandpa is a cultivator who returned to earth and reunited with his great grand daughter who is a chinese twitch-equalivent streamer.
Chat gets hyped up to see the old man do mysterious things.
Daughter has no idea.
That's pretty much it so far.
ok here is an honest review and i personally think that your story is great for your first time and i find your MC really interesting . Keep it up n good luck
This novel has a ton of potential but sadly is held back by a ton of grammar issues that makes it look like it was translated by a machine. If the novel was rewritten with proper grammar and some of the sentences were revised to flow more easily then this would be a 5 star book. Another problem is that dialogue comes in the middle of paragraphs and is not separated when different people start talking making it hard to follow. The sex scenes are terrible and impossible to understand while having an unnecessary amount of cussing.
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Not bad, I can see myself expending my time reading this novel.Hopefully, it gets picked up.------------------------------------------------------------------------
Its a really good novel, the grammar and sentance structure have minor errors but nothing huge or immersion breaking. I only have two complaints. One is the lack of a system interface as of chapter 45, a example of how this interface could look like is below.Name: XXXXLevel: XXPercentage to next level: XX%Technique: Ulimate XX Sword Skill Rank: Novice (+)And so on.The other compliant is how later on there is more inspiration taken from Way of the Devil than I would have liked but the early stuff is very original such as the different types of phyiques and sects.Overall this book deservea a solid 4.4-4.6 stars and the author should be very proud of all the hard work and they have put in to give readers like me such a good novel. Recommended, especially if you have never read Way of the Devil.
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