I'm writing this review as of chapter 70. I think this series has a lot of potential! But it could use some work to realize it. I know it currently has over 800 chapters at the time of this writing so maybe these issues are addressed by now but I'm just giving my thoughts about what I've read so far. I think this story takes a very different approach to stories that involve the main character having a system in a world where everyone has one. Systems are generally made to make the growth of the characters easier and or faster than it would be without one. After all, why spend years working out and training relentlessly to become strong when you can just level up and do quests? But with this work, the bad guys are manipulating the game/system to try and make it so the main character and the rest of humanity don't get strong. So the main character has to be smart enough to find ways to make the system work for him instead of against him. All while screwing over the bad guys that are trying to screw him over. It helps the story feel unique. I also like that there doesn't seem to be much Deus Ex Machina going on. Every challenge the MC wins against is because of his strategies and not because he pulled some power out of nowhere. But there are problems. One is that are are fairly frequent grammatical and spelling errors. Some are more noticeable than others. The second problem is that the story doesn't seem to know if it wants to be a harem or not. It also seems like there's a bit too much info given at once to keep track of sometimes. It just feels like the story's scope is already way too big for where it currently is. But overall I think this is a pretty good work that deserves a good look.
Well written, clear plot and great character development. The pace is just right with side stories that could make you feel what the author wants you to feel. This novel deserves more that it has received, it is clearly a gem. Good work.
Love this novel. When i checked on the vote session, this novel dissappear. Wjy it is dissappear and whybit suddenly become a non-trial??? I wait for long for this but WEBNOVEL keeps dissapointing me....
As of chapter 40, this novel can be summed up in one word 'confusing'.
It's as if the author decides to write ten horror stories that's happening at the same time. Of course, it'll be confusing. But it might not be as bad if there're better introduction and descriptions of each of the horror stories. Instead, all of them just got randomly thrown out. I get it. It's supposed to be a confusing time in their world, but the readers shouldn't be as confused.
Most often than not, readers get thrown into a different scenario shortly after starting the first one, with no transition. I was like 'what? what just happen?' all the time.
The MC is also not the brightest cookie and a bit contradictory. He's trying to stay under the radar of the government since he got this human-skin book/scroll that can ****, but he goes to a buffet to eat for >5 hours straight each day without ever leaving to use the restroom while his stomach is still flat. How is that flying under the radar?
Right now, there's no plot and no direction. I wouldn't mind the lack of them if the horror stories are more organized. I would have stayed just for those horror stories. Unfortunately, the way they're being written isn't enough to keep me here. Sad :(
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Oh, what? You wanted a unique novel with an interesting premise and an intelligent mc, this novel is the one then! A well truly developed and realistic love? Great, this is the one for you! A mc whose emotions are like that of a real human? You got it. Hahaha just kidding, I the great author of this novel is going to ḟůςκ you so hard baby!
The synopsis was interesting and unique but it instantly turned into a typical isekai novel very quickly. The "intelligent" mc is the opposite of smart.
The "love" is so forced, it's ѓӓҏing you.
But don't let me stop you from reading this garbage, instead look at all the other reviews so you can prevent yourself from jumping into this pile of ѕȟit and wanting to kill yourself after somehow managing to read all the way to ch 50 :). p.s. author stop being a little ɓɨʈch by replying to this with the copy paste reply.
My first Webnovel story. I'm excited about this. Picturesque is also published in Wattpad. I'll be updating this story regilarly. Read responsibly!
Dropped chapter 4 for few reasons 1 the sale of gun, when you look up online they sell for around 1200 to 2000 not 20/30k2 errors in text going from mcs name to I3 saying that mc left the gun their to go for auction due to errors in text4 simple errors in text5 simple errors in text6 mcs reason for killing himself7 jumped in water wrecked phone but not the $50
Nice, when the first one finishes I'll run straight into the this. It's one of the top three cultivation novels there is.....................
Hormonal **** who saves a girl in a f*cking game as a monster, becomes her slave as a "after sale reward" but he's just a p*ssy, MC legit has all the cliché bad things happening to him, girl friend breaks up with him for his bully, gets bullied because he looked at rich kids girl or smt, suddenly his dad has to pay a debt in a week but he can't afford it, father suffering an illness, etc. This is legit the most cliché stuff you can find on this site, it's honestly would be parody if they didn't take themselves so seriously. A wasted novel.
this is one of the best novels i have read recently , i am absolutely in love the novel . read till chapter 40 and have nothing to say..............................................................................................................................................................................................................................
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