The story is good. Nothing new to the genre but well executed.
The trad is uneven, In fact it's MTL and that work 95% Of the time and it's pleasing to read. The only problem is with "gun" translate by "wooden something". A bit disappointing because it's almost the only problem. Keep in mind that it's free.
Thanks for the trad I passed a good time.
I have read further in another website.
I am really disappointed. The redseal arc and his grandson totally put an end to this novel for me.
Also the MC, his mother and other powerful cultivators can't seem to kill weaker cultivators than themselves. It is unrealistic.
Another thing I don't like is the complexity of the novel. It is getting out of hand with reincarnation, time-travel, transmigration and two many characters.
The junior sister character was not needed. You should have focused on his relationship with his mother on this book and introduced a late romance from another realm when he gets really powerful.
good luck on your novel
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Hey readers! Author Kaiser Ken here! Thanks for joining me this far. Things are about to get crazy in the following chapters (past 30).
However, as the book title suggests- this is a PREVIEW of my story- GOD FORMULA. It is signed non-exclusively and hence I cannot post through this Exclusive account.
But it is available on Webnovel, updated regularly. Please search GOD FORMULA on the website/ app to read the full story.
Thanks! More free chapters await you there!
I feel that the way it was written was super dull, boring and just too unsatisfactory to even continue reading. I’m not sorry to say that I really dislike this novel. Will not continue reading it. After the first chapter people will ask themselves..”What even is this? What is with this horrendous senseless plot building up to...”
Just to say, this was not a well thought out story. The way it was carried out was bad. One word to describe this novel...BAD.
But to some other people they might want to trek on with this story and continue to journey with it. I applaud those whom continue on this road, there is no return from reading this mind numbing story.
Sorry translators, editors, author, all those who read this. There is some offense within my words but I will not apologize for it but I do apologize for all your hard work. I thank you for wanting to translate this, thank you author for writing this even though I will not continue reading it. Editors thank you for working on this. May everyone praise all the hard work and glory unto you and everyone else.
Farewell.
the writing errors overall ruins it, but so does the some nonsensical stuff like, bringing in pre-prepared stuff for a test testing your potential, overall I would've read and payed for more chapters if author would actually fix alot of stufff
Apparently it's better then I thought it would be. Nothing to complain and story deserve nothing less then 5 stars.As author said it's a light hearted novel with an Evil hearted neighbor as control tower. this novel can really check your patience level if you are waiting for them to do it. Anyways take your time and enjoy the ride
People who said that this novel is a gem must have some kind of tumors their brains ?
Amazing! Though I’ve read up to chapter 36, I must say, I love how you write! Firstly, I loved how you created atmospheres—it almost reminded me of those sci-fi and Marvel movies I’d watch in theaters. The way you wrote the characters were also splendid and they felt quite life-like. I also like how you depicted the main character (Miller) and his relationship with those around him. The way you established settings was also splendid- it wasn’t overly descriptive nor too plain to the point where it would be glossed over. Though there are occasional grammatical and punctuation errors such as using lowercase letters in situations where it should be capitalized, missing commas, and runoff sentences—it isn’t detrimental to the quality of the novel. For this, I suggest using Grammarly as it helps you with proof reading. Overall, I’d say this novel deserves a 4.6/5, and I’d definitely come back to read this in the future once there are more chapters! Keep it up, author!
So much potential yet ruin by the slow pace. Too many filler chapter and not to mention long and useless paragraphs that for explaining simple thing.
Why isnt this updating? Its such a great novel, better than 99 percent of the garbage on this website. Is someone gonna pick this up eventually, or is this donezo?
One of the best clan cultivation stories I have seen in a very long time. The characters are mostly family members and so far none of the annoying cliches like face smacking have happened. Story has great potential and I will certainly continue reading it.