Wonderfully written story with a well developed and well thought out main character. He is Ruthless when necessary without being psychotic or needlessly cruel like most ******* authors make their character, and can also be kind as well. A character with true depth.
Love this novel! The way the system teases the MC is funny and makes a great contrast to the seriousness of the disciples and the cultivation world. Really looking forward to seeing where this goes XD keep it up author!
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This novel's Title is translated to 'Eldest Senior Brother is Ordinary' and is a very good comedy novel, you can search the title i mentioned and read the mtl. I am caught up with the raws and damn, this novel is a funny novel. Don't expect plot, only constant comedy.
Just imagine, What if all this was simply his imagination? His way of coping with the loss of his friend. The tool to fight with his crippling depression.
I only have one thing to say and one thing only - from ch 6 to chapter 17 there was no plot development, there was 2 chapters wasted on the "enemy" inner monologue which consisted of - "I'm better, how dare this commoner argue with me, how dare he look at "my" women" and so on.a fight was supposed to happen on ch 6 and didn't happen as of now and it's ch 18...
Sorry RebirthDao... I tried, I REALLY tried, to read your novel but you need to continue studying the English language before writing a novel in that language. Well, perhaps you are writing in your native language and translating it over to English.Whichever it is, I could only get about half way into your first chapter before I had to just stop. There are just too many grammatical errors and such, making it far too frustrating to continue on.I wish the best of luck to you.
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The concept is ok, and the world background is cliche. MC unlocks the soldiers, but apart from the beginning dungeon doesn't use them. The character design is 2-D and the concept of unlocking talents is stupid. the only good thing about this novel is the above mediocre translation quality. The only thing I recommend is not reading this book.
i usually wait till a series is in full swing before reading as it takes more than a few chapters to cause me to continue reading. this was not the case as I was fully engrossed in the story by the end of chapter 2. would wholeheartedly recommend reading
Reading a gaming novel without game elements sucks. No info about hsi character, items and other things. Why dodn't he choose Magical or Fanthasy instead of Video Games. Why is MMORPG in the title? What's more... I could barely read these chapters, this is too boring.