While the story is not bad, it lacks direction, consistency, and quality excitement. The mc does not have much of a goal or task that he is actively moving towards. Not to mention the many contradictions for the mc's behavior, for being a over several hundred years, he has the emotional fluctuation of a teenage girl on her period. As for the fight scenes, you might as well skim them, they are not great and often confusing (there was one fight in game against a team of rangers- 2 melee and 2 range with the same weapons and no distinguishing characteristics between them- so one of them seemed to go super saiyan and the other was just there. he also seemed a bit pretentious with giving the characters a bola as a weapon)
Honestly this story is pretty terrible. I mean the amount of times face and courting death has been mentioned in just a few chapters is off the charts. It's gotta be some kind of record. The MC's intelligence is very low. He is out here making some really dumb choices, and his character is straight sus what with the talk to the system making him powerful enough to conquer his wife...speaking of the system, it is terribly designed even in a sea of terribly designed system novels. You'd really have to turn off your brain to enjoy this one.
the story is gold just need more chap daily and the storys should keep going at this pace,author just dont disappoints us.
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This is an enjoyable and thrilling story. The writing quality is great. I like the pacing of the story. The chase scenes are great., The MC is lovable.,
Great job, author!
Definitely gonna keep this in my collection., :)
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It’s was a decent start but alittle confusing at time would read again
......yah this novel is nice and interesting. I like this novel , and I like the Caracters
names , Facinating ,and mainly that Farzana Allahamut albana. and I'm waiting for next chapter's
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Just starting my book, and reviewing it to leave this here. The theme is historical, the theme I love. I have no clue how good that does on Webnovel, I actually think it doesn't really good. But that doesn't matter, I like writing. Planning to write a whole lotta more chapters, so stay tuned.
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great work bro keep it up and lead us to a good end in the story
i have recommended you work to my friends they will also see it .
I am pleased after reading this story
Finally a cultivation novel with no dumb cliches lets goooo
from 000 to 999 the author course to have the dormitory number be 666 is he ok. he must have a reason for choosing such a number as a Christian can't read it recommend this book what's this trash