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After reading thirty chapters, I can only say this novel is disgusting. There is constant fat shaming, racism, narcissism, hypocritical bull ****. Author is constantly trashing hard work calling it useless. Author quotes the protagonists looks with 'average looks'. It can be inferred a few times later that dude is handsome. Author is jealous of his own Protag. Like, what? MC is rude af to his childhood friend because she is chubby. Chapter 28, she slims down. It is actually written that he feels he can no longer bully her because she isn't fat anymore. It's f***** up. Disgusting. Honestly, it felt like 30 chapters of an upset middle schooler's diary. Good premise, worst delivery.
Of the 143 fully read qidian novels in my library, this might actually be my favorite, or at least top 3.
It’s without a doubt the best cultivation novel I’ve read, and it’s quite refreshing in that it deviates so much from other cultivation novels. It truly has its own charm, and even though I love novels like Lord Xue Ying and desolate era, this slightly more slice of life and comedy style cultivation is often a more enjoyable read.
The story might remind many of “the spiritual attainment of Ming He”, in that a lot of the same characters from Chinese mythology like nuwa, three pure ones and so on, but the novels style differs a lot.
A great aspect to the novel is that it doesn’t only follow the MC, but also a lot of likable side characters. These characters are well written, have their own stories and personalities. You get vivid feelings for different characters, like his earnest master, his slightly clumsy and adorable junior sister, his scheming (in a fun way) uncle master, his unrestrained martial aunt, the icy but innermost fiery senior sister etc. You start to like and care for all these characters.
So my conclusion is, try this story out, it’s great!
If it doesn’t get picked, I might just have to read mtl, but I’d be extremely sad as it would feel like running this master piece of a novel.
Good story with disent background ...I hope there will be more details in the future.....with some unexpected twist... rather than some representative stuff....
I instantly fall in love with this booki hope the author will finish it a soon as possible I'm looking forward for that to happen.
As for the character I really want them to be lover
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Hi this is one of my favourite books so am gonna be improving the translating a bit to making it more readable hope everyone enjoys and if u see some issues please do know am just improving it to the best of my ability without changing the meaning of the book and story flow thanks again and have a good day[img=recommend]
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Nice story
But mc in dd1 or dd2 or what
Need more update if author want this story top 50
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Alright it's time! I've been reading this book for a while a oh boy it's been an emotional eide to say the least
Author's pretty good, improves very quickly and is just so cool
if you're up for some fun, tears, fights full if action it's probably the book for you
Author keep it coming
"Fate presented two cards and she chose both." Isn't this enough captivating caption to make me 'need' to read this?
Your style is beautiful, and your story unique. Sure I won't regret exploring the journey of your work.
petition to bring back the world of deities.........................................................................................................................
Its trash. Not only is it cliche, but the translation is garbage. For Example, 11 somehow = 100. Makes sense! The development is garbage, and extreamly cliche with a disgusting perverted mc. The character design is also extreamly cliche, and perverted. The MCs sole goal is to make a 3000 strong harem, which is DISGUSTING. There is almost no background to the world, and it makes no sense. Also his system is weird af.
