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The overall idea of the novel is good, it's the reason I gave this a novel a try but 2 major things have made it so I'm hesitant to continue...1 - although not bad so far, the mc has shown foreshadowing of becoming another happy go lucky, plot armour, arrogant mc that this site is famous for, he hasn't done anything to fall into that category yet but the way it has been written and the way the mc thinks and reacts to the things happening to him are way to similar to those sort of novels this site is famous for (perhaps I'm being paranoid to be fair).2 - (and honestly this is the main reason) the fact that it has become locked at chapter 5 is mindboggling, It is way to early to tell if this is a novel I want to commit and pay for. I'm already somewhat skeptical about how it will be progress for the reasons stated above, so with that kind of mindset how am I going to pay and continue such a novel. If there is anybody who has gone on ahead and read the chapters 5+ please tell me if it is worth paying for to read, the premise of the novel is really interesting to me and I'm just hoping it doesn't digress into those brain dead plot armour story's. But until I know I'm not willing to pay, I've been burned to much on this site
Nice story, but slow progression. Speed it up and I will read teh entire novel. Good writing though.
Story is straight to the point and at times, can be funny. I am here to support this story and I hope Author dont stop this interesting book. As with other books, I bet there are other mysteries too.
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The story is very fast-paced, but the development is pretty great. I don't know how the author will fix the hole that is jumping three realms in terms of power, but I'm sure that with his great effort, he can do it. A very good novel,a diamond in the rough, waiting to be polished.
Change this novel name to ****.....................Stupid Mc Stupid Mc Supid Mc Stupid Mc Stupid Mc Stupid Mc ...............................
Extraordinary protagonist!!! Great story, But when is it going to update? I have to say I think that his childhood friend is the one he loves.
This is really a nice book. Worth the read. Author don't drop this. ??????????????????????????????????????????????
Excellent grammar, interesting story with a lot of potential. Would be interested in the romance part, but I have no complaints so far................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................
The MC basically has the Power from the Mc of the Netflix show/series "Preacher" but on a wider scale.Right now we still have a bit naive MC which doesnt really know the limit of his Power, which the Author calls "Soul Power".But over the first 10 chapter the MC try to get to know the limits off his powers and the accuracy or what he needs to say accuratly for the effect he wishs for.I dont have anything in particular to nag about because the gramma is good and so is the spacing of the sentences (not one giant blob of text).And since its really earky for a review i cant really say if the MC smartens up and gets like a Leylin Farlir ( hope i didnt butcher this name/wmw ) or if he will get a "Katekjo hitman reborn" annoying mc.We will see what the future bring but right now this is an absolute and resoundig."Go read and give the novel a try"
Pretty interesting story, classic pro vs antagonist story, but that is what makes it good. The translation is quite good and he has fixed any mistakes that have come up! Great Story!