Beautiful book, the world is interesting and The writing Is great, its a Good Dark Novel, Its been nothing but perfect
i love this but i do think you need to work on the setting like one minute their dropping off jeremey next there in a cave and i'm not saying i don't love it because i do but just tad of work and your improved and please keep it free i don't want to get a cliffhanger because i don't have vip.
Thank you. Please publish more chapters. Your story development is somewhat slow....
this story is interesting and lovely I love
the best zombie novel...................
Grata start so far of Alice story waiting to see what happens between her and jermin
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Great book and satisfying to get into collections to read
i already loved the introduction! the writing style is entirely understandable and ready to read with a touch of humor and there that perfectly describes the main character's thoughts. i think the flow as well is not too fast, not too slow, which is a perfect balance because the story itself is already good so we get more hooked. the system is also really unique, but not difficult to grasp. its suited for many young male readers (or females too). keep it up, author!
I seriously cannot get enough of this book, it’s utterly compelling to read and the humour is brilliant!! It has made me laugh to tears!! The writing style is amazing, the characters share a fantastic dynamic and the storyline feels very unique and like it is going to warm up to be a really good and interesting one. So far the concepts have really got me hooked, I am so excited to see how thongs will unfold. 100% recommend giving it a read but be aware there is quite a lot of use of profanities. For me I don’t mind as I feel it works in the context of the book but I realise it’s not to everyones liking.
Good story idea, nice plot. The story development is slow but that's not too big of an issue. It's a good story. The grammatical errors should be fixed tho. it's not much but it would greatly improve the quality of the novel.
nice story work and script for the book when I read