I don't believe this story isn't more well known, it is such a great read, and has a great development, one of the best I've ever found on this app
The story took such a nose dive at chapter five and six. it’s one if not the worst and most annoying cliche plots that always get used in these types of stories, even though it completely ruins it. It was really promising but that just completely ruined it for me. it’s a dumb and incredibly un-original plot point.
well where to begin. let's start with the good. the story and idea are a little unique compared to other system stories up to chapter 13. my main complaint about this one that is really holding it back for me, is that the author is writing like someone with ADHD or ADD. what would be a few chapters in normal books is a few paragraphs that is immediately shoved aside the second the next point appears on the horizon. it really ruins the flo of reading .
I really enjoy the way the story is written, I smiled readfinh about the little sister... Characters have been beautifully described. Highly recommend! Not a book you want to pass up?
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It was a 4 star but then the Author brought the most unnecessary cringe trash Character that his small Chinese brain (if he has a? )would ever think of
The sorry has a different feel.The plot is intricately designed, the background of each scene is well described too.The author has put a lot of effort in the creation of this novel, i can assure you that.
A cultivation novel that is actually different from the thousands of cultivation novels where the main character is considered trash even when he reaches immortality.
The novel reminds of Upgrade Specialist in Another World. The main character has the ability to upgrade weapons in a more efficient manner than other blacksmiths.
He has extreme talent in smithing.
His talent in cultivation is ordinary, however, due to receiving an object with the devour attribute he can take the blood and qi of beasts to increase his to cultivate faster. Others can also do this through the use of special herbs to increase their blood and Qi. It's just easier for the main character as all he has to do is kill animals.
His cheat? allows him to hold attributes in his mind palace? which allows him to transfer and take unique attributes from weapons and apply them elsewhere as he wills.
The story seems good.. however, i left at chapter 10 as the cultivation system seems to be in mess. Would not go deeper into it as if anybody can move past Chapter 10, then they are good to go as they are comfortable with the cult. system. However, i was not as i felt that it became more and more confusing which irritated me. Also i wish the author gets a good editor as there were many grammatical issues.
The protagonist is a novelty and the supporting characters are being developed well. The unique strength increasing methods are also interesting. I also like how the protagonist doesn’t get cheat but has to rely on intelligence and effort just like the rest of the planet
The story seems kind of good, but you have butchered it with the poor grammar. Sometimes I dont exactly know what I'm reading. The world background was kinda ok.
Need more chapters, as currently there aren't enough to form a stable review about this story(now I'm just writing for 140 words) ,
Maybe increase the screen time of some of his suffering, maybe even a shot of utter despair, even some more interaction with the world around him in the future chapters