A very nice book...captivating and intriguing! The author really has his mind on this book, It's a must-read, I assure you.................................
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I did think it was trash.But after I read it ,I felt like this is rather good to compared to other trash there.It is good.please don't drop it.[img=update]
Excellent story, set in a D&D style universe that is hurtling towards an apocalypse. It has a bit of infodump towards the beginning, but the story remains fun throughout.
The MC is powerful, but not so much that he is op. Well worth the read.
harem? really? those are actually difficult to write in a non immersion breaking way. It's usually not believeable in execution and often drags the novel down. Also, even if your pets are humanoid, it's still messed up to do things like that with them.
Cons: The grammar is horrid and is almost nonexistent, a few characters feel unnecessary and I just hate even if they have a purpose, such as the sister. She might give the MC a purpose, but it's bad if I hope she dies in every single chapter she is in. The novel uses a ridiculous amount of cliches and is like I said, inconsistent. For ex. in one of the early chapters which was a small example, The notification literally notified him it was nora in front of him but he asked himself where nora is (as if she's not there). Also in one chapter the author forgot to add a description of a class and said they would as soon as possible, its been a month since. The rules that the author makes are inconsistent for example at one point the MC sadly states he can't use a spear because he's a warrior, and then comments right after that classes can use any weapon. Then a few paragraphs later he begins using a spear which I don't know how he has, because according to him warriors start with a sword and shield. He then instead of being a warrior becomes a mage, which is acceptable, but using the very same logic from earlier he shouldn't be able to use a spear but does.
Pros: The story seemed bearable and maybe a decent read if the grammar was fixed. Not too many here. Giving it two stars because it actually kept me reading like 5 chapters.
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kind of cool since I love cultivator genres. overall, the novel is good. a good read, and quiet entertaining. highly recommended to anyone who loves these kinds of novels.
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A very nice read. I enjoyed how the author is able to engage his readers. I would totally recommend it to everyone. A very nice job, author.
Sadly another trash novel.
Mc is too stupid to be even considered human. What a waste of a good novel concept...............................