i just like, too bad this is dead space and space
Interesting read. Though still too early part of the novel, it's enough to get my attention. Will continue to look forward to the next chapters. Good luck authorsan!
The author has a creative mind. Editing and proofreading would clear away distractions for readers.
It looks like someone review bombed this novel (a bunch of low ratings posted at the same time). It's a really good novel so it sucks that happened.
Very strong story, rare things these days for trial reads.Waiting to see how it goes in the future..................................................
Edgy revenge fantasy. Otherwise, it's okay, for a simulation novel. Speaking of simulation novels, is it just me or have they been getting better lately?
welp the review i gave is just. till chap 11 after the boy wakes up and **** he has the ability to learn anything and do the impossible possible and some other **** yet i cant seem to find marc at all it like there is only 1 soul in the body and not 2 even tho marc got into teh body it like the boy killed him or smth the subject of marc isnt even touched upon but it should be if marc himself is in the damn synopsis. anyways what my problem is that this has a pretty **** grammar quality but it readable. it has ****ty character design for the kid acts like an ***** even tho he was inside his own body for 5 years or smth but he doesnt seem affected at all and it not normal he doesnt seem to have any psychological side effects even after he was inside his body still functioning but couldn't talk, if i put the best cookie u ever ate in front of you and then starve you for years how would you think ? anyways basic psychology is a NEIN. World background ?.... well we know he is pampered by gey mothers and has a grandma who loves him even tho she never say him. and he loves them even tho he never saw them, as his moms his grandparents are rich too. yeh imo the only thing till chap 11 is just that he is rich and cant even seem to find the slightest bit of fear that he might have a hard life. if he has not hardships he can never learn truly nor experience ****.story development.... ohh wait that exists here ? i thought the whole story was about the kid being a superhuman who can do anything if he desires nothing interesting here 0-0. updates are very good. all in all if the guy would learn from his mistakes and create a new novel he would best start small and then make it big and he shouldnt be focused on filler till at least he has 30 to 40 chaps cuz u gotta make the main story a priority not how much the mc is so badass and he has the IQ of 1000. Buildungs roman. if u ever heard of that term learn it. anyways hope next time the author will make a better first impressions cuz this was truly a disappointment.
The concept is Interesting, but doesn't write the story for you. This will be a lot of work beyond controlling various diseases. Unless you can characterize the diseases so they become an integral part of the story.Also, this concept has 50% more potential if you can make diseases from the symbiotic bacteria that support and help the larger lifeform they inhabit, and turn them into your Support Pet that gives permanent buffs.The concept has another degree of potential if you can make layered disease arrays. The idea is to have your probiotic buff colony help control your disease attack colony, taking a lot of the pressure off of you to directly control each instance of your Diseases. With these formations and systems of Diseases, you can recruit and reward allies in addition to tearing down individuals. And it makes surgical strikes possible, rather than just being a Plague Bearer Demon Lord.
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Love the ineraction between the main two characters, and how their bond changed from A master who disdained her servant, into a duo, which has complete and utter trust in one another.
I love this story incredibly. The MC is OP but doesn't change how he is, at least in any negative way. I love the world building and progression, and can't wait for more. Great work author!