Overall, the entire novel is pretty good except for one definite flaw. The MC. He is obnoxiously Naive to the point that I felt like I was having an Aneurysm reading the things he thinks/says. I find myself speaking/talking out loud about how stupid/naive his actions are atleast 1-2 times per chapter.
La historia me ha gustado hasta ahora, lo que sí me tiene preocupado es la reencarnación, si bien ya e visto novela de este tipo que amagan con lo mismo pero pasan 100+ y no cumple su objetivo, ojalá el autor no prolongue esa tan ansiosa reencarnación, hasta ahora tiene sentido que el mc haga cosas sin pensar en las consecuencias, después de todo su objetivo es morir.
the title doesn't match the story even if match those girl with system is just filler even the world are not written by her sister we never knew who the sister he the one who write the world why just be straight forward about the summary and not destryo the expectations of the readers..
Author review 2.0 because everyone seems to be doing one and I thought I'd join in!
Things to expect from this story...
1. No OP mc that never faces any problems. I will add that Aurelia is very flawed and some of her decisions will make you shake your head.
2. An mc that acts her age. She's young and it shows! She makes mistakes and as hilarious as they may seem, she does learn from them...or at least she tries to. Wrong things she does at one point, do come back to bite her in the butt. But that doesn't mean she'll keep making mistakes, she's not dumb. She's just learning.
3. Friendship among characters that could be considered enemies or rivals. And yes this includes some reincarnates. Not every character other than the MC is an antagonist. They may have been at one point but Aurelia acknowledges people make mistakes, and she might decide to forgive them - even those that don't deserve it. Or kill them, depending on her mood.
4. Suspicious, sometimes paranoid MC. No Mc that know everything because they reincarnated and have two brains. This mc does not rely on plot armour, so expect lots of questions to be asked about things she encounters because she likes to know...stuff.
5. Characters that have agendas outside the mc. Not every character revolves around her, they may be close but have completely different motives than she does. Some evil/scheming characters are to be expected.
5. Character development for everyone, not just the mc. Side characters will have their own backstories and you will see them changing overtime for better or for worse. Even the mc changes!
6. Romance! Much much much later on in the story, but expect it to be confusing and full of surprises.
7. Slightly slow paced story. Its not slow to the point of crawling, but the first few chapters aren't super fast either because I was focused on establishing a character.
8. Decent writing. I'm not saying it's 100% perfect, you'll get the occasional typo when I proofread too quickly, but I always go back and fix them. Expect some descriptive portions (I like using words to paint scary pictures). But other than that, its alright compared to WN standards...I think.
Generally chapters should be between 1500 to 2000 words, some chapters just end up being longer than I expect
sick characters ,brilliant world building that is nicely spread and not all info dumped at once and good mc.also fig the magic and abilities
A post-apocalyptic Isekai story with the classic system is nothing less of intriguing! The story elements is there, but the writing needs a bit of improvement as some phrases were a bit convoluted and the tenses got mixed-up. Other than that, this definitely get's a place in my library! An amusin read!
i love this book like all the other author's books. but this is a bit heavy for me [img=update] the fights and gore and nudity is too much. but i enjoyed reading t cause the characters have their personalities and the world is captivating. the mysteries also hook me. honestly, this book has it all! action, adventure, magic [img=update]
So far I love it, even though it makes me angry I still like the story, keep it
Best trial read in a while. I hope this gets selected. Ignore the cover art. This is a magical realism novel.
Love the world building,especially when the author describe the certain places! It provided a gripping glimpse of how the characters lived in this well-developed world, and the action was heart-pounding and effortless to visualize.
Author, It's not like I hate your novel by giving this low star review. I will be honest here, I really want to read your novel and give a good review but right now I'm totally hesitating to read your novel. The reasons:- You have too many incomplete novel and everytime I got hook of the novel you start a new novel and your old novel got forgotten with no updates. This happen thrice and I'm disappointed enough to stop reading your novel altogether.- Inconsistent updates until you drop your novel after all that work you do. You can't stick to a novel until completion and that sucks.I hope this message will enlightened you of why there's many reader hesitating to give a try or spend their time with your novel. Thank you.
I like the novel but will the release rate change in the future? 1 chapter a day is too little