Easily the best novel. The story, the characters, I think everything in writing mostly come down to personal preference. A lot of people for example complained about the quote dialogues obviously because they aren't used to such because I can guarantee if it was a style that was used early on, people would like it but because it wasn't they don't as many people don't like to change, and someone tried telling me to never write again all because of a sexual scene, as if the sexual scene is "bad writing" when in reality it's literally just their own preference that they don't like the racism that was involved or the way it happened, if you are a sensitive and delusional person that would rather read about things THAT WOULD NEVER HAPPEN IN THIS WORLD then move along, because my novel is about things THAT COULD ACTUALLY HAPPEN IN THIS WORLD OR HAS ALREADY HAPPENED and if you don't want to face the reality then move along.
It falls into the trope of building characters only for one arc and then never using them again. Female characters that would appear long term are forced to be abandoned cause they can't keep up And if you have read any cultivation novel you know that when he leaves the realm everyone becomes unimportant never to be seen again That happens in chapter 416.
The only thing bad I can say is that its going premium but luckily right now its free for a limited amount of time it pains me because I was going to wait I just read the whole thing at one go after stoping around 100 chapters but it seems that I will need to start rereading now but if I decide not to you know where I'm going... I don't understand why its going premium but I hope its a good reason because the majority of people stop reading when it becomes premium out of nowhere which saddens me a lot because not only am I one of those people but less will learn of this beautiful story.
im leaving this to stack up for now, but if it is as good as the one before, ill happily leave this 5-star review...
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Although the idea was good, the execution isn't. The MC is almost brain-dead attacking people with obviously more power than him.
"Magnetism" MC:" What dat?"
His enemies are equally brain dead and keep talking to eachother all the time, changing their plan every few seconds.
Talent test: 'Do I even have to say it?'
Plot armor? I don't see anything else, he does attacks that come out of nowhere while he has 0 cultivation. Awakens system just as he was dying.
If you want to read this novel these are the things that you should be aware.
Misspelling ~ It would have been ok if there were only a few misspelled words but there to many that you would have to reread the sentence to understand it.
Grammar ~ Along with misspelled words are sentence that is hard to understand because the grammar is messed up.
Fighting Scene ~ Just skip the fight scene. It's like a 3 yrs old kid playing fights with his toys.
Story ~ Just give up!
And my most hated thing about this novel is:
It's Premium ~ I don't know what made the author thinks that this will is worth the premium but for me it's a waste of "Fast Pass". Don't bother spending your FP, if you want to read this novel just wait until it's unlock. It's not worth it!
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Just the title alone is hilarious and I'm expecting lots of funny moments in this one. The book may lack chaps as of the moment, making the world background and story progression somewhat unclear, but I'm confident enough to say that this book will end up great, considering the author's skill with his craft. I'll leave this here to tell the future readers not to miss this one.
This is about 2 brothers exploring a VRMMORPG game and its mysteries, when they do discover what this game it about.... honestly can't continue without spoiling the ending a bit, so..... enjoy?
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Good read*.*this is very captivating the new kid on the block.Never judge a book by it's cover the guys in the middle of the road thought this character was a walk over I like how he approach them play innocent.They were thinking this fellow is a pushover big mistake.Dark honour great title chosen it says exactly what the title of the book is all about.If you could please unlock more chapters.