Okojus
I live this novel. It is well written and the update schedule is decent. I can't wait for more chapters..................................................
Wow! What a masterpiece! This is a promising novel! Good job Author-san! hope for more updates!!!![img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=update][img=update][img=update]
overall a good start some places story seems rushed
I’ve really got no clue why you made the main character downright ugly. I wouldn’t care if you made him average looking, but literally none of what he does makes sense when he has such disgusting looks.
I’m giving them all a 5 because you executed them perfectly. honestly, world background, and character design deserved more than a 5!!! I loved how descriotive it was, it flowed easily and I felt like I was standing right there. I’m also a fan of an epic plot, and I can’t wait to see how this story will end!!! Greak work!!!!!!!!
Its highly interesting to see original and unique novels. The author is really good at writing the story which you could see in the novel!
Although certain places had huge paragraphs but still I would highly recommend this to everyone!
An easy to read novel with very good narration the writing quality is good too and the world-building and plot are excellent I am looking forward to being part of that mysterious girl's journey Keep up the good work Author
I'm loving the story so far. It reminds of melancholy of Haruhi Suzumiya mixed with deadpool.?
I honestly had high hopes, but ultimately was met with the same disappointment. the first 50 chapters were very fun to read, but it soon got boring and frustrating. Why endure ridicule from people lower than you and let yourself and your wife be abused mentally and physically because of a stupid MC trying to keep his pitiful attempts to stay low-key... Honestly even the people are so stupid. they can't even connect the dots when they have the same last name, so much for so many coincidence!
if MC really loved and trusted his wife, then he'd confess the truth soon after he got permission to make debut to the world... but no, the author dragged it out to the point of killing readers with boredoms, fury, and frustration...
at begining it states very clearly how difficult it is to progress in cultivation but that is disproved even quicker than its explained
by chapter 9 his 2 friends are already at disciple level and MC meets Guards at a singular tiny city that are Duke level. if they are guards then the master of city needs to at least be at king level. for a cultivation novel with 90 levels (10 rank each rank being divided into 9) and MC already meeting people in levels at minimal 54 it truly doesn't show difficulty in progression in cultivation of their are so many that they can be little guards in a singular city ?
In all honesty this is only the second book on this site i had ever spent money to beable to read chapters faster (I have had this app for about four years) the quality of the work along with the character development is amazing.
The story is slow at the start but it really is worth the read.
Why did the author stop
