interesting and mysterious. I would love to read more and see what happens next. I might not be a good reviewer but at least this is what I personaly think. Cheers! lets help this novel everone!
Alright! Here’s my honest review on this story:In the first chapter, the spacing of the paragraphs sentences was horrible. But this gets fixed almost immediately in the chapters after that and I suprisingly didn’t see any flaws after that initial first chapter.I can say the characters seem interesting along with believable interactions in most scenes. Some people might believe the characters to be stupid, but they are just teenagers in the story at the moment. So them being stupid is very normal. Especially in the beginning.Currently, when writing this review, there is only 6 chapters released. Because of that, I haven’t seen enough of the story to know if there’s proper pacing or story development.Also, there needs to be more regular updates. At least for the first 20-30 chapters.This is the end of my honest review.
Everything is soo goood!Couldn't stop reading when I started. The plot, character setting, grammar, CHECKED. I love the book. I'm in chapter seven, still going. I must FINISH this book!
I'm happy with the story and the world that the story takes place in. The update speed is also good. The only thing I ask of you is that you do not drop this story middway and have a definite end to this. And please don't make this a harem.
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Terminei de ler O início parece literalmente TBATE Mas depois fica muito melhor e original e acontecendo coisas que eu não esperava, foi uma boa leitura Vale a pena ler
Amazing book and author. Very final chapter ties in with their other book, “Reincarnated With A Summoning System”. This novel is as funny as it is riveting. I am sad to see it end, but am excited to see the side stories as they are written. The very first few chapters are slow, but stick with it. Completely worth it.
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I was actually surprised when I learned that this is the author’s first book. It’s a commendable job for a first time writer. Anyone can read it. Even those whose mother tongue isn’t English and are looking to improve their English like me. I really loved the part of the forest of the endless trees and hope the writer has planned to continue it later. The detail in the writing keeps me captured and the read is quite enjoyable.
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