Amazing work
Just love the story. Can’t wait to read more. Excellent work!
What should I say about this story? It's just awesome. It got a good plot and appears promising. Author has done an awesome job in depicting the emotions portrayed by the characters n fantasy world build up. I usually don't read fantasy genre, but this one caught my eyes. Kudos to the author .........
intriguing blurb as in wow? thank you author for written this book..
this book makes me laugh and cried afterwards, it's been a heartwarming and if only can make it into the real world...this place of ours would be a better world after all...I love Tora's character so much as a mother!
great work Author Emma!Bella
Amazing author
please finish the series. I'm on pins and needles
Dear readers, I wish the best for you in this 2022, Happy New Year!
128 chapters 8-4-24
"A Supreme? More like a dumb lucked-out idiot. The main character goes back in time and screws everything up. His family was supposed to be massacred in 10 years, but he manages to accelerate the events, causing their destruction in just 10 days.
There are other novels where experts travel back in time, but this one is probably the worst. Instead of acting like an experienced powerhouse, he behaves like a clueless protagonist who just started his journey."
This is genuinely exceptional and not your average run-of-the-mill novel. An amusing tidbit is that all the main female characters in the author's previous works share the first name Ye: Ye Sui, Ye Zhi (I Support the Richest Man), and so forth.
Okay, this novel was pretty much an amateur work.
The setting and plot could have been interesting, but it felt like the author didn't really plan the story at all, resulting in some weird plot twists and characters very often acting truly bizarre.
**Setting:** An alternative universe with a strange mix of Medieval Europe (knights and such) and the modern world. The political structure includes a king and dukes, but the accuracy of the translation of these titles is questionable, making the entire nobility system confusing. The ABO (Alpha, Beta, Omega) setting adds another layer of complexity, with dominant alphas and omegas playing significant roles. Dominant alphas can only have children with dominant omegas, who are highly fertile. It's unclear if alphas can have children with betas, but alpha men tend to marry alpha women, who cannot bear children. Despite this, marriages between royals and nobles are often based on uniting bloodlines, which doesn't align with the fact that alpha wives of noble blood cannot have children. The society is highly patriarchal and extremely discriminatory towards omegas, who are treated as birthing machines and third-class citizens due to their heats, which are perceived as making them overly sexual and driven by lust. However, dominant omegas are highly valued for their fertility.
**Main Characters:**
- **MC and his twin sister, Rachel:** Both are dominant omegas. They were raised by their omega mother but were later found and taken away by their alpha father, who handed them over to their uncle. The power dynamics within their family are unclear, possibly due to poor translation.
- **MC's Abusive Uncle:** Raises the MC and Rachel, planning to use the MC as a sex slave for powerful alphas who want to have children. Rachel, however, manages to get engaged to the crown prince, a dominant alpha who wants to reform omega rights and needs a dominant omega to bear his children.
- **Crown Prince Jake:** A dominant alpha who can only have children with a dominant omega. He wants to secure his position as heir by having an alpha son and agrees to protect the MC in exchange for bearing his child. Despite his initial motives, he becomes genuinely kind and considerate towards the MC, and they fall in love.
- **Duke of Liefield:** Married to the MC's eccentric alpha aunt. He has a major crush on the MC, which comes off as creepy given the age difference and the fact that he is married. He attempts to manipulate the MC into becoming his lover and bearing his child, showing little regard for the MC's well-being.
- **MC's Aunt:** Abuses the MC by examining his intimate parts against his will and pressures him to become the Duke's lover.
**Plot:**
- **Rachel's Engagement and Attack:** Rachel's engagement to the crown prince is called off after she is attacked by a terrorist during her wedding, leaving her badly hurt and unable to have children. She convinces the MC to offer himself to the prince to bear his child and secure their safety.
- **MC's Deal with Prince Jake:** The MC agrees to bear the prince's child in exchange for protection from his abusive family. The relationship between the MC and Prince Jake develops into a genuine romance, with the prince being the only genuinely kind person in the MC's life.
- **Duke of Liefield's Creepy Behavior:** The Duke's actions towards the MC are disturbing, including his inappropriate attraction to the MC even when he was a child, his willingness to let his wife abuse the MC, and his tantrums when the MC rejects him in favor of the prince.
- **Confusing Plot Twists:** The story includes several plot twists that add to the confusion. For example, the MC was raped by his uncle, had a miscarriage, and forgot about it due to trauma. This event is mentioned once and never addressed again. Another twist reveals that omegas have omega children when they feel safe and are in love with their partner, which explains why the MC's child with Prince Jake is an omega.
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The entire story is extremely confusing, and much of this confusion is likely due to the poor translation quality. The novel is a difficult read, and the plot and character motivations are often illogical and poorly executed. Despite its flaws, the relationship between the MC and Prince Jake stands out as a rare moment of genuine kindness and consideration in an otherwise dark and convoluted narrative.