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so , i think this story has immense potentiel in the future to be great i had a fun time reading it ,the main character enopy is great also love layen the world is pretty cool thus far , and i am looking forward to exploring more of it overall i enjoyed the story quite a bit
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I think this is being written by a horny 14 year old... Cringed so hard at the description of a vagina as a "wet cave" that i had to quit this novel!
Did an overview seems nice....The story development and all I think it will be a nice read .....keep writing.....wish you all the best for your next enaveduars..
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new wibe about story settingsworld building is slowstory progression is mediumnew story linejust some loop holes in plotnew wibe about story settingsworld building is slowstory progression is mediumnew story linejust some loop holes in plot
I'm giving it 5 starts in advance, because I like prehistoric novels since childhood. I can't even remember how many times I've read the books of J-H Rosny while spending summer holidays in my grandparents village
... well.. grammar is good. But i hated that mc basically went from sick and malnutrited level 1 kid the size of a chair with nothing that has the strenght of a sick dog... then he opens the starter pack and gets....to being level 100, 6''3 tall with 8 pack muscles. 9 inch D. With a godly rank sword, a godly rank sword skill and enough money to shame anyone, 2 godly physiques that can charm any woman alive with no effort thst has dual cultivstion and merge any new future phsyque he gets at chapter 3.... honest. He got soooo many overpowered things that is extremely excessive and ruins any progression that the story may have. Any random of these cheats is already enough but so many at once? It would have been 10 times.better of he got these slowly in a period of like 30 chapters or more
I just want to say while it's still early change the storage 'ring' cause when he grows up it's weird how a ring for a 5 yr old will still fit, sure magic and all that but it's weird, other than that the story's good
please dont drop