Good
Overall its good the story developed in a good way but the way he train is just insane and it feelLike he would be a pro already but I know that its a fantasy ich novel so it just bugging me and I dont mind it that much. I know people commented on the grammar but it really suck and I knew it is hard to write english too cuz English my second language. Like I get the overall sentence and stuff cuz I read google translation chinese novel. It just need a bit of editing sentence strcuture and it will be good, so if you trust me I would like to edit your work for you.
Please give us further summary, the summary above is not interesting. I have feeling this novel will be good. (sorry for the critism and thank you)
Its good overall but it feels too slow on the long run. Ive read 1000 chaps and only 1 month went by in the novel. The world background is quite good and i liked how mc fighted the world without background but i got bored from time to time since everyday he did almost the same things and author for some reason had a fear to skip things, be it time skip, skip repeating the same rutinary actions everyday or just skip the half chapter description of rewards mc gets from hunting monsters and so on.Also, i didnt like how the romance is set in this novel. By now mc has just 1 relationship even though there are like 5 girls at least in love with him but he just ignores them. So you might think thats because he was in love since start with the 1 relationship he has, nop. He started a relationship with a princess he knew just of 2 days and didnt meet for more than 3 times and showed no mutual attraction but ignored bai yun who was with him from the 1 day and is clearly devoted to him.Other remarkable thing is the mcs attitude, read chapters 995-996 and you will know what i mean by that. He claims through out all the novel not to be a saint but acts as one when he can and also when he cant, helped by the plot. He claims his moral as the upright and when someone doesnt agree with him the first thing he did was to check his loyalty because he is too used to people licking his feets and walking a smooth path. He is willing to show mercy (in those chaps and i guess itll remain like so in the future) to the enemy when thats a privilege of the powerfull, which he isnt but is too full of himself to realize. Specially if you know some chaps before almost his army was wiped by the remanents of the kingdoms he destroyed, because he didnt left them fully clean, because they set up a trap and would succed if not the mc realized thanks to the plot and make it in time. To sum up, the story and the world background is really good but there are some things with the pace and mcs personality who are hard to endure. If you can, you should really read this novel because its def above average.
Why is the translation so bad? Aren’t you making bucks through this ‘power stone’ thing? Can you actually try and do a good job at translating? Jesus christ
Wow possessiveness i like it
it is very interesting and can't wait for the chapters to be unlocked
this book is so interesting
loving it so far. Kudos to the author
Absolutely love this book!! I can’t wait until the second one!! I highly recommend this book ??
very interestingly descriptive not boring exciting too
who the fuck posts stories that I got to pay chapters for, and it's not even finished!! Deleting this app asap. enjoy my $4.99 pieces of shit