VoidErbus
We just got to that part
I liked all of IET novels but God, he's terrible at timeskips and he keeps getting worse. This latest one, Cosmic Professional Gladiator had so many timeskips and they're terrible. Even tho I liked the novel, it's almost like reading a summary and not a story.
I hated time skip that just goes '2 years went by' like, dude, how many paragraphs are there in a chapter? How many sentences? Break them down can't you. Use a sentence to describe the weeks, paragraph to describe the months. That would only take like 10% of the chapter length but it flows so much better.
Towards the upper middle part, it got so much worse, at one point I think there's a timeskips every 2 chapter and it went like the example above. Even after that, when getting into a new arc and he arrived at a brand new world and new power system and got so much to explore, it literally timeskips in the very next chapter he arrived, that part really p*ss*s me off and ruined the immersion
It's a light read, the fluff at least for me doesn't make me giddy or warm, but the entertainment industry plot is interesting I must say, it's omegaverse mind you but it doesn't fall to the typical omegaverse plot line so I like that, everything else about the novel except the romance is overall a good experience, just that the romance for me is a meh, felt forced for the mc who is supposedly "doesn't fall for anyone ever and only think of work", his circumstances doesn't differ much from before for him to easily fall for the ML, honestly if the author give it more time to developed naturally I'd like it more
Why does this give yoai vibes any one who completed this can u tell me if this is yoai or not
This book offers everything a supernatural fan could want: high-stakes battles, romantic tension, and mysterious secrets lurking at every turn. Seraphina’s internal struggle as she uncovers her powers feels incredibly relatable, despite the fantastical setting. The lore behind the Lobizonas is fascinating and makes her journey feel unique in the crowded supernatural genre. The pacing was spot-on, balancing moments of heart-stopping action with quiet, introspective scenes that deepen the characters. If you’re looking for an exciting escape into a vividly imagined world, this book will not disappoint.
I’ve been reading this book since the beginning & constantly checking for updates!! I was very happy to see it updated yesterday & with so many chapters thank you! This book has been amazing from the very start! You are a wonderful author & I hope to keep getting updates so I can continue!!
Wonderful book, great read. Wish i had the money for coins.
I'll be glad when you update this book
I like the story ...
Such a great, beautiful and touching love story.. Had me cried so many times . I am satisfied with the endings ..
I don't like it. even the title is annoying!!!
Loving this book! The story is great, the characters draw you in - I’m all about it!
