"Gau Duzal! My name is Azrael Gideon. Another freshman tome maven that masters Ancient Magic of Enhancement and Defense. " I introduced.
Cooking and comedy are my kind of thing. I just hope the storyline is good. Too bad though there isn't much information from the synopsis. On the positive note, the cover photo is kinda catchy so I think I give this one a try. (if it doesnt require any spirits yet ?)
While I am a fan of the story and the author, the editing team seriously dropped the ball on this one. Consistently misspelling Mag-lev as meg-lev, misused words and blatant wrong words show that the editing team generally skimmed through with a spell-checker and did not check the grammar or word context. After that, they did not even read through their own work before posting their mess. The worst offense was in chapter 79, where they were retarded enough to not only screw up the same word three times on one page, they also ****ed up the spelling of the main character's name. THIS IS INEXCUSABLE.I'm done with reading this ****, might come back to it if they ever fix it. I don't like having to stop reading every other page on average to make a corrective notation. I realize that this is a completed book and is not currently being maintained. I wish to state that it is a terrible idea to leave it this way, when it could be made so much better with a little time and a good quality editor.
So far looks promising. A guideverse with new approach of using cards. World building seems good too, so I'm eagerly awaiting for the story to develop.
I really enjoy your work! I'd love to stay connected and keep up with your latest creations. Do you have any social media or email? It would be great to be in touch~
I don't like the writing style, the mc is dumb but does things that are said to be hard for pro players using plot armour, no information about how levels and attack/damage work, the author just uses it according to his need.
So I read all the free chapters which was like 40 something. From what I could read, there is so much to work on, just in the beginning chapters. Author should go back and fix it and if the rest of the novel is like this then it's not worth reading in my opinion. Lots of inconsistencies and information being put out with no explanation like Magic. It hurt to read it and this is as far as I go. GL
Will give it 5 stars but...it needs a lot of work, it doesn't give me the feeling that I'm reading a novel. I'm still in the process of reading it and the chapters are very short but there is something about this writing that I can't put my finger on that just makes it seem...incomplete. Maybe someone with better critiquing abilities will be able to spot it but this novel just doesn't feel like a novel, it's somewhere between that and a journal. I plan on continuing to read it for now but these are my thoughts. I recommend readers check it out for themselves.Good luck, author, I don't like leaving bad reviews since I think everyone should give a novel a try before they bash it and especially for new novels, leaving a poor review (star wise), can be detrimental
It's a pretty cool twist on history mixed with sci-fi stuff. I do like how you build the world the story takes place and the characters are well-written, well-balanced, and well-fleshed out. It's an interesting premise executed very well and I do believe this is a book I would recommend to sci-fi fans. Great work!
I loved the story.I really hope you can completely recover and continue to write such amazing stories.Wish you all the best,author for a more healthy and happy life.
this novel has great potential, too bad that the author is not focused on it.Author focuses on the novel because his novel is great has great possibility of contract with wn, maybe a few chapters in pa.tre.on while n has contract would not be a problem.
These chapters keep getting better and better! I am so eager to continue the story as you release more. I can not imagine being The Operator in this very merciless world.