Nth + 2 times my review is deleted.....But I will review it every day so the author can understand how much trash this novel is..... Beware this novel is trash among trash...
I feel that reading this fun quirky little novel adds a +5 to your Culture stats. For an extra +5 (that's a total of +10), grab your wife, girlfriend, children, or little sibling and read this aloud to them. For +20, read it aloud on a public bus. While masturbating
Started to read because of tags like R-18 and hentai but there was nothing till chapter 91 (and when the time came for r-18 it wasnt anything great too~~)
BUT I FUC*EN DONT CARE! DONT CARE! HEAR ME?!?!? DONT CARE CAUSE THE STORY IS GREAT! FUC*EN GREAT! I LOVE IT! AUTHOR- YOU HAVE GOTTEN HERE YOURSELF A FAN HERE! THATS FUC*EN ME!
I love that you build up relationships ~100 chapters and then do the deed! The characters are great! Dialogues are great! Editing and profreading is good cause i never had a time where i had problems with reading! Girls arent feeling forced to love MC.
It isnt boring like some VR where author wastes 10-20 chapters on one dungeon or quest or a fight!
MC is not a pussy and IS HONEST to his desires but is not a scum and a really good guy! He is not dense or stupid! Doesnt do stupid or irational things and kills those that need to be killed!
MC didnt make me cringe even once entire time only sometimes laugh a little! And he is not used or overly optimistic and even if he is used then he knows it and tries to change it or makes use of it!
Strongly recommed to everyone! Dont care about R-18! Read because of the plot, comedy and cause its interesting to everyone (healthy males :D).
There are a few small mistakes in writing which can be a slight turn off, but not enough to ruin this amazing book. The author actually out a lot of thought into the background of his story and has his characters thought out. I haven't seen much character development yet. But the story is still new and I can't wait to see what happens.
if you're "lucky and extremely lucky" or "unlucky and extremely unlucky" and if you're enjoy comedy just read this.
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Fuck. I love this book!!
But why is there only four chapters ??!!! !! !!! !!!!!!!
please update more author!!
Amazing novel,......................................................................................................………………………………………………………..……………………………………………………
Here is my honest review!First is the translation quality: It's average, but the word choice is quite good. I enjoy reading it. It's good even if it's average.Stability of Updates: Don't know yet. This novel is still in trial read. We will probably get 14 chapters/week if this novel gets picked. Story development: The story is unique even if it's a system genre. I can't comment on that. I can't call it cliché either. The pacing of the story is good. Not slow and not too rushed. Not too much attention on details and you will have a sense of progression as you read the chapters. There are unexpected moments and you can look forward to what will happen in the future chapters. This is talented level.Character Design: Characters with personality. I like it. We also have character details. I know how the characters look. The author gave me just enough details. Very well balanced. The MC is interesting. He's badass, cool and a good looking scum. His personality is charismatic. You can't find another one like him. World Background: It's a modern world with cultivators and beasts. Yes, it's a very used world, but that's okay. This type of world suits this type of story so I don't have a problem. It's not a detailed world either. World Background is probably the weakest aspect of this novel. As I said, the novel doesn't focus much on details, especially not on world details. My evaluation: A super balanced story with very good characters. The author doesn't dwell much on details, but we get a story with a good flow. The biggest strength of this novel is the MC and the natural flow. A good balance between comedy and seriousness. Let's hope that the quality will stay the same even after the novel gets picked. Most of the readers will like this story. I can guarantee it. Not everyone though.I hope this review helped you understand a few things about this novel.Honestly, I feel like it's one of the best magical realism I've ever read on trial. I'm a fan of these types of novels.
interesting story and world building. but I think the story assumes a lot of things at the start like the fact that there is mortal plane and cultivation plane.and he was a spoiled rich kid who suddenly has enough stamina to do blacksmithing, initial few missions should've been about exercising then story should've introduced how blacksmithing works like different stages and functions of different equipment in the workshop
this is NO for me i'm not even gonna bother continuing reading it not gonna i thought it was a good story but turns trash very quickly3 star for writing quality2 star for story development2 star for character design (describe as people with animal pelt bruh?)2 star for update stability (once a month?)2 star for world building (lacked of description not that i would bother reading it for 40 chp ain't got no time for thatanother 1 star for because a lot of people seems to spam 5 star even it's even worth it just because they can(Must be spam not or somethin dunno)