An action and adventurous story with fighting and thrill. I am kind of loving it.So far it's nice Looking forward to more chapters. Keep the work??
The story at first sounds interesting, but as I read, I realized that MC was a stupid guy, he had a lot of power and still didn't think of protecting his family or hiding his name in the previous life and the present life, for his persecutors, only causing hate. MC doesn't care who dies and cares little about the people he knows. It's an interesting story, but the background is bad.
1. I got a dig bick 2. You that read wrong 3. You read it wrong also 4. You checked 5. You smiled 7. You are wondering why you still reading this8. You see the mistake right? (on7)10. But did you see I skipped number 6?10. You checked 11. And saw I doubled number 10 and skipped number 913. And did you see I skipped number 2 14. You got tricked 15. But did you see that I skipped number 12 16. You checked and wandered why am I wasting my time on this.( You got tricked )
Great book, very interested from the beginning to where I stopped. I look forward to reading more and more exciting stories. I can't wait to read the next story.
Excuse me but I have fallen into your novel, now I'm leaving but first I want to tell you that it has caught my attention.You may probably be angry, so I apologize in advance.Well I go back to reading, cover this place so I don't fall again while I'm reading.
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novel had good start , had the potential to become one of the best novel if author had remained on plot. I don't know what author thought but he ruined a good story and then started coping solo leveling. novel lost its Originallilty. if only author had remained on its original plot this novel would have been in my top 5.but now novel has just turned into another wannabe solo leveling
The book is interesting hooks it's readers with the plot, and flow of her words right from the beginning. It is a book worth giving a chance.
A review should be more than 140 charavters but I really want some XP. This helps a lot. I really like the character designs, they are different from what I usually see.
nth new....yes that's right..nth new.... why waste time on this when we can read other new ideas........alot of other novels with great story are waiting to be read
I'm not sure why people are falsely giving this good ratings than it actually deserves, are their standards so low? I read 50chap which are free before deciding to stop wasting my time with this.Chapters have so many errors, inconsistencies, grammar, spellings which breaks your immersion, even with readers pointing them out in paragraph comments Author didn't feel the need to fix it, shows much he cares about it.Author sometimes say MC use mana then in next paragraph it's Qi. What?? "I have eyes but failed to see mount tai" typical Chinese saying, tell me is there a mount tai in that game world? if not why did someone from that world say it? it feels so wrong. MC and his friends goes on calling each other brother, brother, brother it's super awkward. His friend spend thousands of years in game before MCs arrival yet there's no visible changes in his personality, he acts like a child along with MC and emotional moments are so forced.Author uses CAPITALS to convey emotions are screaming/anger instead of describing them, feels like it's written by a school kid. Story isn't original either, just another isekai but worse with chinese copy paste. The way they use "hidden" expert and other bs is just ugggh.
i hate system who give's quest which failure means death or any penalty. instead of guiding him it's forcing him. he doesn't even need that system with his past experience, worst of all their is a death penalty 'what a joke'