First of all, this plot is overall interesting and so different from what you would normally read. Plot-wise, the creativity and imagination put into this story is excellent. The action and fights add a nice thrill to whole story. Also, there this is a touch of sadness to the story, and there is mysterious cloud over the MC, which I think will made any reader want to know more about him. Keep up the good work!
Should of read the reviews didnt know there was fut@ until chapter 20 should of added tags for it.
Good intresting plot but the protagonist has faced 0 adversity till now no backstabbing no jealousy hate crimes I mean thats one part I like but it completely not being there makes it too smooth sailing for the mc and lack of meaningful interactions except dana further there is close to 0 world building aside from the golden dragon city there is hinted that its a big world but the concept has not been developed also there are multiple filler chapters like trial arc and the rewards that followed it took 20 chapters and then the bus incident again pointless an actual development of foreshadowing of where the story is going because there is no clear antagonist it is just the mc getting stronger and everyone is helping him
very nice book..love it so much..all the character is very good..
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Hey author! Just caught up on all the chapters here so far. I don’t think I’ve seen a red dot by the book title of the app indicating a chapter update in a while. I get that you have other books so I won’t pressure you on it. But will this be continuing?
Hi! This is kera, an editor of the international writing contest SWA II. I believe your book has great potential, so I invited you to join in a week ago. Please reply to me so I can discuss this with you in detail.
Hope you don’t drop there isn’t any good basketball novels coming out lately I read all the good ones already
This novel started off so good but author had to fxxked it up.Why made thing so fxxking complicated.From trying to find his missing father, to finding his girlfriend/lover who apparently got send back in time.I regret reading this.
THIS BOOK IS PRETTY GOOD BUT EHAT MAKES THIS BOOK GARBAGE IS THE ATTITUDE OF THE MCS BEAST!! HE LETS HIS BEAST DO WHATEVER THEY WANT AND THEY ALWAYS POUT WHEN THEY DONT GET THERE WAY AND HES LETTING ONE OF HIS BEAST BE A BULLY TO OTHER BEAST IN THE SECRET REALM!! THIS BOOK WAS DOING OK BUT AFTER THE LAST LIKE 5-10 CHAPTERS IT BECAME GARBAGE!! I HOPE PEOPLE DONT READ IT AND I HOPE IT GETS TAKEN DOWN!!! UNLESS THE ATTITUDE AND THE BEASTS CHANGE THEN ITS NOT WORTH READING AND ITS BASICALLY SAYING ITS OK TO BULLY THE WEAK AND ALL THAT AND THROUGH TEMPER TANTRUMS WHEN THEY DONT GET WHAT THEY WANT!!!
Hi, everyone! I've already read the first book of this novel in Italian language and I really Love it!I can assure that the story will gets better and better even if it starts a bit slowly, it has a truly unique plot so if you are looking for something different give it a try!I think it's a must read in my humble opinion! :)
Where the FUCK is the Next chapter HUN AUTHOR SAN?!?!?DO YOU KNOW HOW BIG OF A CLIFF HANGER YOU LEFT OF ON? HMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMM!!! Maybe just a few more chapters?? hm? a closure? hm? maybe? please?