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Beautifully written! You explained each scenario in so much detail that I got lost in that moment. Keep up the hardwork! All the luck for you. [img=recommend]
dude got 100+ int and 200+ Wis as basic stat and he chose[[ Archer]] among all the basic classes..idc how much you gonna validate, it at the of the the day it's not magic but just a sharp pointy stick
Amazing story! The writing is very,very good.
So far this story is pretty good. GRAMMAR IS ON POINT. The story so far is getting pretty intricate also, having some foreshadowing and hidden plot. The *** scenes are vivid and well explained making my blood boil with excitement. Overall good story so far.
I am 99%,sure that the Book has been dropped. It was a good book while it lasted, especially the recent chapters(after 406), which were good. Too bad the author dropped after introducing some major plot points.
The writing quality is smooth and engaging, it's a very good read! The author updates enough to keep things moving, and the story's development is perfectly paced and sensical. Character design...I want to see more and more of Sia, I hope there's a lot a lot of chapters to come. Sia is like an accidental but still somehow kickbutt hero. It's an interesting way to have a character, and the author pulls it off flawlessly. I'd give Character Design 10 stars if I could. World Background is good too, I gave it 4 out of 5 because I know there's still more development to be done. It's a really good read overall, if you're looking for a story like suede, this is the one.
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Superb storyline, thrilling plot which keeps the reader hooked to it... anxiously waiting for the next part to see what happens to the killer
I didn't know this was here... I was so focused reading it in pattern that it didn't occur to me that you had posted it here.... Well, the story so far is very good and entertaining, the only annoying thing is that the MC doesn't want to get into a relationship but, he has like 10 willing women Wanting to be his wives, lovers, or just sleeping with him... It's an attempt at a story without a harem, but I already know you author, unless it has the label of non-harem, then I reserve the doubt, It may happen in a thousand or 300 chapters, but it can happen
So far, I really like it. It have human experimentation ,reincarnation, superhuman mc, and a mc who wants to live simply. it's that I am not really into dark webnovels but this webnovel got me hooked. For some reason I kinda feel like something is missing? I don't know what but can the author try just once to find it.
It is an interesting take on the daemons. The first five chapters did a good job introducing the main character. Will like to read more chapters in the coming days.
The story is fantastic. Definitely a 10 out of 10 there. The character building and Arc is also definitely a 10 out of 10. World building again 10 out of 10. The English on the other hand, well it's not very good. Regular misspellings and incorrect words being used. With that being said it's not hard to understand what the author was trying to say most of the time. Dont expect the story to follow any scientific laws whatsoever though. Also while the fights are very enjoyable to read, it's almost as if a teenager is describing an anime fight not anything that would be done in real life a lot of times. With all this being said I absolutely love the story and would definitely recommend it. Overall I would score this novel a 9 out of 10. Its truly enjoyable to read, and very descriptive so it's easily visualized by the reader.
