This is just so cheesy. You could probably replace this novel with a recording of a guy saying "be nice to poor people, money doesn't matter" on repeat, and nobody would notice. Also, feels like the author probably received money to advertise someone's car brand.
The novel really started well and promising, but turned to the worse. Characters were not developed, the world become too wide, but doesn't posses depth at all, areas are there just to pass through and forget about them. Things which the MC learns and gather are not used, aside from maybe once or twice in the following Chapters.
MC gets progressively stronger and meets progressively stronger enemies, which he beats easily by his overwhelming experience from past life, good looking girls swarm to him ... and that's basically it.
Could've been great, turned into a train-wreck in my opinion.
Translation is very good, updates are really slow, story is basically a circle, characters aside from MC are nonexistent and even he is a cliche in therms of OP MC due to reincarnation basing all of his motives, moves and decision on his past life and nothing turn out of the expected.
World background is on decent level, but never developed more then the passing presence of the MC, which aside from the start is usually very short.
Would not suggest to any reader, aside from those who really are into the cliche of OP, reincarnation and harem.
Unresponsible translators, many empty promises made, but ends up delivering only 1 chapter a month! Several times this project has changed hands and recruited new translators, but every time nothing changes. The release pace is non-existant!
First, this book still needs to be edited. The author keeps promising one, but I am past chapter 200 and it is still atrocious. Every paragraph has at least one typo. That’s not including the occasional weird, and nonsensical sentence structures, or the poorly identified conversations. It makes the book hard to read.
The author does a good job with the story telling and world building. But, I am starting to see the errors in consistence that start to plaque many web novels.
I am to the point I am not sure I will continue to invest my time in the story.
After re sending the chapters will you be adding to the story as well or just re doing the chapters?
I love it the way you kept adding you in it I was just like omg and the way yoongi and ana and rose were swearing and beating their husbands up was just funny and Jin said lucky jungkook and Tae got a C-section .
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let's give it a shot
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uma ótima leitura para quem gosta do gênero.
This is a very good story about the main character (I forgot the name
Author, plz dont drop this novel. It has a very good potential, and you just need to reach for it. We are all eagerly supporting your novel and patiently awaiting your next entry....