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These types of novels are my favorite because not only do they have an op main character but this one has cultivation and system. These both are considered favorite by this young master.
The story looks pog, waiting for more.
The story has some good potential. Good idea even if its a bit cliche, its quite entertaining. The problem is the leveling system. The level range from the kingdom the hero was summoned at was so far away compared to other places like maroon city. There should have been a clear "Max level" if you will or a level range of people at the apex of strength residing in that world but what you see in the story is one kingdom having people 1-100 while other cities have people 4000 and up in levels. Its sounds so weird. If the author had given the level of usual knights or kings and court mages maybe then it would've been fine or if the level range would have been more logical.
It's possible that this is my second review on this book but I'm not sure...
Mc had a promising future as an overpowered all-element mage but throws it all away for the singular darkness element. I can handle stupidity but that just takes the cake, I'll be dropping this novel on chapter 19.
There is a confusion in tenses. Characters are detached and it makes it difficult to feel empathy for them. The flow of the story is forced.I would suggest building more on character development and the settings. Info dumps are also a huge issue.
me encanta es satisfactoria la historia como en el arco de la mama que sufria trata de personas al final volvio con sus hijas y mc me encantó la comedia y la personalidad de MC adoro al que subió esta bovela porque yo la queria leer en español y no me dejava en su pagina pero esta esta mas avanzada y puedo traducirla a español (soy mala en ingles la tradusco con chome)
Until now (for me) this novel is perfect. I´ve read many novels on webnovel and most of them aren´t as well written as this. This novel just seems so unbelievable good thougt through and realistic in terms of the decisions the main character makes and how situations unfold. Thank you for your work author, i think your novel has really great potential! Many greetings
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All hail for some news. Even though it is not all my toys this is good enouph as long as their is no ntr to the mc. That is my only one wish for this as I have been given good work on the AMT. Hope you get some inspiration.
to read this you have to have a slight degree of masochism or turn off the brain
If you try to take the story the least bit seriously, you will hate yourself.
I don't know why people aren't reading this novel. The writing and story a very good compared to most of what I see on WebNovel. I can't say whether the concepts here are unique ,but at least they aren't common and overused, like many novels these days.
I wish more people would notice this novel, as I am worried it will be dropped by the author soon due to lack of views.
I liked reading this book. Great characters and thought out plot. Only thing I didn’ like was the one month hiatus because I was really Into the book but overall it was good. Keep up the good work.
