I didn't think I was going to like this noveloh how wrong I wasI loved every chapter and I honestly can't wait to read all of them as soon as they get released
Your story is so nice please auther-ge do continue on making wonderful BL story Where here to support you on your journey on making them thanks again auther-ge...
I really like the world and setting you've written, as well as the realistic interactions. My only gripe is having so many characters introduced that it's sort of hard to keep track of all. If you're still planning 50 different characters I hope you can cut it down and make each character more memorable this way. Other than that it's great with pacing and worldbuilding
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Helluva book that brought me to multiple laughing fits ???I'm not really into a gaming system type of novel, but this one brought me to that sorta thing. Writing - it was pretty fun and really easy to understand for casual readers. Grammar didn't give me a headache so 5-stars for thatDevelopment - all I can say is HAHAHAHA over and over again.Characters - well HAHAHAHA the dialogues are enjoyable in and of itself so I really vibe with the seemingly immortal NPC Bob and his relationship with the chicken Stability - keep it upWorld - just great!
At first I didn’t expect I would become addicted to unrivaled tang sect but as I reach 42 I began to itch for more and I am expecting more great things to come. Update!
The story is great in my opinion, but I tend to like any book that satisfies my angsty blood. Truthfully, the world-building happens quite fast and sometimes it's just a bunch of info being dumped on you, but once you sort through that information, it is quite amazing. The fights tend to follow the same old cliches in which sometimes it ALMOST seems like the main character is about to lose but then he wins. I don't actually think he has legitimately and formally lost a battle yet. It follows the same trope as certain cultivation bases are revealed to the main character as he rises through the ranks, which I'm okay with.One thing that sucks is that the quality of translation takes quite a steep dive as you get further into the book. Names will often be wrong and certain names will be mistaken and misplaced. Sometimes even cultivation techniques will be mistaken as a character's name. The overall flow doesn't change much but it seems like less care is getting put into the story, which sucks. The main character is okay but he always overcomes basically all obstacles. The side characters are pretty bland and the enemies are worse. They are all one-dimensional idiots who repeatedly spout out their backing before being killed, and it stays like this throughout the entire story. One thing that annoys me is that everyone has a mind attribute that increases as they get stronger, but everyone has borderline mental disabilities and are retarded. They can't think straight and are always so f***ing prideful.The romance is almost nonexistent. There is one main girl but the mc never actually portrays where he stands and never says whether he loves her or not. I actually like it this way because I tend to not like romance in novels like this, I like them to focus solely on the mc.The story develops in the same way the cultivation bases are revealed. Once the mc gets to the peak of what he knows, more is revealed and more parts of the cosmos is shown. I actually like how they do this though.After all the bashing that I have gave this novel, I actually really enjoy it. I started reading it to quench my thirst for battle after reading The Mech Touch and this sure can do it. So if you are looking for an overpowered protagonist and don't care much, this is a good book for you.
I would have given a complete five stars if the author made more chapters per week. Nothing more to say than just a perfect story. Really needs to be published to hard copy. This story has the potential for so much more and I think the author will provide. Just a nudge to the author, fans aren’t just fans because you give them what they want but because you give them what they need. And we need more chapters!! Lol
I read all 45 of the available chapters and, while it wasn't terrible, it also wasn't very impressive.Going in, I thought that the MC "inheriting the strongest account" would cause him to instantly be extremely powerful but... no. In reality, it just gives him a huge pile of resources and a million years of "accumulated cultivation" that he can use. The resources help him built up his sect (and the system missions he has gotten so far are also focused exclusively on building up the sect) while the "accumulated cultivation" can be used in small bursts to help him bypass the middle stages of each cultivation realm - but then he still gets bottlenecked before advancing a major realm like all other cultivators.So, while his golden finger gives him immense advantages in speed of cultivation, ultimately the author is walking the same tired path of having the MC slowly advance his cultivation realm by realm. Of course, almost every cultivation novel is like this so it's not a huge knock against the book. I was just somewhat expecting something different because of the title.As for the story itself, well there are only 45 chapters to review, but it also seems pretty bog-standard. The premise that MC is a sect master is good, because it forces MC to interact with other characters regularly, but it's also somewhat annoying when he attracts random hatred from a dozen different factions because of the baggage brought along by his disciples. For instance, his third disciple is a stereotypical jade-like beauty who is also secretly an abandoned princess, but then when MC uses his golden finger to awake her hidden bloodline (heh heh), the empire behind her jumps out to make trouble - sending a few batches of mooks to try to kill MC and bring the princess back. Coincidentally, each new batch of mooks is appropriately leveled to MCs own current level, each batch being strong enough to pressure MC, but weak enough for MC to defeat.And that's why I call the story bog-standard. The MC makes enemies for reasons at varying levels of contrivance, and those enemies are always stronger than MC, but not so much stronger than him that the situation seems completely hopeless. Then, there the same predictable song and dance where the enemies send out people to deal with MC over and over again, and each time the thugs are a bit stronger than MC, but MC can still beat them thanks to his OP main character cultivation techniques.Basically, all the foes in the book are just brain-dead mooks who extend their faces for MC to slap, then go back and call their grandpas to let MC slap those faces too.The only facet of the story that seems to have some potential for originality is the whole "sect building" part, but by chapter 45 MC only has 4 disciples and the sect is barely getting off the ground. Building a sect and being involved with various disciples and their problems could bring about some interesting story arcs and character-building moments in theory, but at this point, it's still too early to say.tl;dr: All I've seen in the first 45 chapters is a very generic cultivation novel. If more chapters come out, I will probably read them to see if things improve.
Interesting world building and character deaign, but I find the plot a bit lacking. The MC seems to blindly follow his "destiny" as he gradually accepts the inheritance of the strongest expert ever, while there are various seniors who find it necessary to never tell him anything while forcing him to fight vastly overpowered foes, who he manages to defeat either by lack or by the senior's intervention... Meanwhile, the MC is surrounded by women apparently in love with him, without any conflicts, but he keeps a distance since he still grieves for his lost love...
I'm enjoying the story but I would need either faster updates or a faster story