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This is the exact same novel which has already been translated before! It's not even a good novel! Nothing new, don't know why it is in the trail read section! Please don't pick this garbage!
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One of the best stories I've ever read that involves a actual werewolf. I hope you make more books with werewolfs
Cliché story with cliché characters, nothing more nothing less.Girls and women alike falling in love with the mc easily thanks to his system. Every girl is a 'jade' beauty be it mature or young. The visual sense of their looks doesn't bring any realistic sense to readers because every one of them is a 'jade' beauty. Story development isn't exciting for any reason, just some girls got hooked up by mc due to poor circumstances, bad husbands, need of money etc.
the novel is quite good and enjoyable to read. but I gotta say that the world building is not quite there yet. It is quite confusing how each fraction in this novel operates due to its sudden introduction with little context. Sometimes I even wonder why the author even bothers to introduce them since it serves little purpose to the main protagonist. One little thing that bothers me is the names of the characters in this novel. Some seem to have their names from the European side and some from the China side which I think is quite inconsistent with the theme of cultivation or culture in the world.but overall if you can look past these flaws. It's still a good read.
Great novel! Is there a discord channel or the like to follow on? It’d be awesome to be able to suggest some EVO-combos somewhere!
the character building was magnificent and also love the cameo of so many other anime lines in the story
Honestly, I love the ingenuity and newness of your storyline. It’s like a fresh, fantasical take on very familiar issues and it makes it easier to relate with the characters. I like the pacing and your overall tone and delivery, but I think you need to work a bit on your grammar construction and punctuation. Asides from that, this is a truly promising story and I think you’re doing an amazing job!
The philosophical beginning the book offered was quite interesting to read, and it was a good start to a book that could into an entire adventure.
Wow, just wow. I'm speechless how good this pet store novel is. Great world building, character designs, reasonable cheat, and most importantly no system. Not having a system in a genre of a novel that are mostly composed of systems feel really nice and refreshing.
