Overall the story is good, the MC is interesting because of his background, but there are a lot of characters that are important besides a few. There is always updates happening so you don't have to wait long and the grammar is good, the world background is important because of the mc and him trying to find out what happened. so overall the story is good, but it can get a bit boring sometimes, but it usually so the plot can progress. There isn't a lot of fighting, so it's hard to know how powerful someone is exactly. So like I said the story is good. GOOD JOB AUTHOR!!!!!
this is one of the best novels I have read, I bow to you sir handsome fatty. This novel truly has monarchic levels of potential on the level of grasping evil and legend of the great sage.
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Good Novel but after around 400 chs many chapters are missing in between filled with some random content.
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From what I read so far, the story looks really great. Looking forward for new chapters. Keep updating on regular basis. Happy writing.
I haven't read that many things in my life, but this is one of the better ones, it reminds me a lot of solo leveling in the way that it's written. It might not be anything up and coming or be one of those ones where you must read it cause it's so good, but in my opinion I really enjoyed reading it, and am waiting for the next chapter.
Review Swap! Sorry it took so long.
Writing: 4/5
Wow, nice writing! I barely saw any grammar slip ups, but a little proofreading could benefit the story. Also, great job keeping the tense consistent. It is rare to read a story in present tense. Sadly, its not really my cup of tea. I prefer stories told in the past tense, solely because I find it easier to read.
Update Stability: 5/5
No complaints here. I'm impressed you've been writing since last year!
Story Development: 4/5
The plot is interesting and has potential. I'm interested to see which direction the story is gonna go.
Character Design: 4/5
The MC can be a bit OP and his personality a bit arrogant, but I want to see how he will grow throughout the story. More imagery could be used to describe the characters though. There are a lot of names, but not enough description for me to imagine how they look.
World Background: 4/5
The world is interesting, but I'm curious, does this take place in modern times? Future? Where did these "Damn" come from? What are the Damn Hunters? I have a lot of questions about the world. More explanations would be helpful. Hopefully it will be described more as the story progresses.
Overall, this story has potential. Keep up the good work!
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overall pretty good, other than the slow story progression, world building and unnecessary interactions.
while I thinks this books is good so far but there is a big jump in the store from chapter 16 to 17 and I feel like there miss parts of the store that hold info we need
There doesn't seems to have a lot of connection with his previous self. Maybe include why heaven got destroyed and connect it to the present.