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A very well written story with great pace and an engaging storyline. The added bonus is that the MC isn't a mess of your typical clichés. Overall very impressed and will be following avidly.
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Still waiting on new chapters. Hope it surpasses all expectations.
Around chp 127.
Honestly it started really well and I liked the family stuff, the emotions seem real and thoughtful and the chapters are interesting..... however this takes a major nose-dive in the second volume.
it just becomes sooo boring and monotonous, lith literally does nothing for the majority of the time and anything mildly interesting happens to other characters but you dont really care or have any emotional attachment to these people as most are just character traits embodied fully and silly.
I understand it's a slice of life and that's fine, but it's a boring slice of life, it's literally saying the actions hes going through beat for beat and that too would be fine but he doesnt ever really do anything interesting it's just going to class, drinking tea and sleeping. even during the capture the flag nothing particularly noteworthy happened.
the only characters he interacts with in the academy are his 2 male roommates and flamboyant teacher with no redeemable values who apparently is gonna be apart of the harem (bleghh). oh and another thing is this is a harem slice of life novel during an academy arc and not one female student has been introduced, no shenanigans, nobody that provides some interactions, be it flirting or whatnot, for the mc.
yaya I get it your trying 'different' and not have all female characters falling over the mc drooling but to reduce that number to 0 just makes it boring when your trying to be different and 'mature', theres a reason people flock to things like that.
all in all good start but dropped off considerably, part of me wants to keep reading to see if it gets good again but I just dont care about reading from so many other ppls perspective when the mc is relegated to being boring and mature with nothing note worthy to do
I have read till chapter 110 and I gotta say i am not a fan of hero protagonist and I would have loved if the ego of red king and the cain would have fused to form someone neutral.if that happens and mc stops trying to sacrifices himself for other and is childish( which I get he is 14) but still . I would like if someone could spoil it form me
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The novel is really interesting and fun. The history is accurate but has a different ending chosen by the author. Personally I'm not a big fan of historic novels but this one is a really good one and I would definitely recommend it.
it's ok. it has a lot of flaws. The character development is too forced, I understand the author wanted to give the MC a tragic backstory but making everyone hate him for no reason at all just made it stupid and not realistic. Then all of a sudden he has a sister that came from nowhere. I don't understand why he's so obsessed with rei and Hana. Rei was just kind to him, Hana is his childhood friend was he expecting her to be with him just for that. author really need to develop the characters better
荒野探秘：神级扮演，开局麒麟纹身
Oddly overy good reviews here. For me the free chapters left feeling like its bad copy of "Everyone Else is a Returnee".
Unlike Returnee humans are left on Earth in protected state like statues. Only mc goes on living. Reading onward leaves me thinking that most of those statues die the moment time stop is lifted.
Next I do not like the mc development. There are lot of time skips. So many development skips that writer himself forgets numbers and developments now and then. Thats why I really cant feel for the mc. Mc low presence (reason that even god left gim out) is not there in real novel development. It is just mentioned now and then when he thinks about his life before or about time during novel time skips.
I may have rated this novel as ok to read if I had not read "Everyone Else is a Returnee". So if you want to enyoy this novel dont read the original beforehand.
I like this novel a lot. It's amazing. The only thing that I don't like is the harem.