when those god was introduced they started using these "HE" "HIM" "THEY" the f is that shdit just usef a facting regular he him they ,
and also the regular earth will also get involved just like same with other same genre
A great novel,starting is good
The grammar is also good. it draws you In from the beginning.
The world building, and settting is also good
Can’t wait for more chapters
Don takes you on a fantastic voyage of life with an elder god stuck to your soul!
Writing skill is good to the point I'm envious of it.
Update stability?? who knows!~
Story development?? because I'm reader who always imagine myself as protagonist so I'm a bit biased!! so my opinion its trash because my brain pressured non-stop since I'm binge reading this novel 2-3 day!~
Character design?? no matter how good it is, its useless since the author will screw him over and over to the point I'm tired of it!~
World background?? its quite good?? meh its still ruined by non-stop torture of fate!~
my previous review is too much when I see your efforts writing this so I'm increasing it but after hard time to think, this is all I can give you!!~
at least your skill in writing is good, so be proud of that!!~
though that non-stop screwing your own MC seem too much for me but maybe its your fetish?? meh whatever!!~
Not gonna bother wasting my time just gonna warn those people who have high expectation to this story Read At Your Risk the mc doesn't know how to think this is a rip-off version of I Can Turn Into A Fish except it's like understanding a person that has down syndrome
The plot is lit! It was an interesting start! The grammar was on point with slight edits that had to be made for perfection! Well, the pacing of the story is fine too, good job! I like the story and hope it gets more support. Good luck with your writing journey, [img=recommend] I can't wait for you to become mature and a veteran author someday [img=faceslap] Keep growing and master your writing style hehe
who are the useless people who got the clone ability and called it bad tho, must be one of those everyone is stupid except mc
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Great start to the story, obviously he is OP but he still has to work hard to enter higher levels! There is no minor character development so far but expected! Like the direction, but at times I wish the MC would interact more with world around him, including other characters!
From what I’ve seen thus far, this is great. The story is different from the usual I have read. I absolute enjoyed the first five chapters and can’t wait for more.
Hoping this isn’t dropped is my wish.
There are so many questions, yet not enough answers. Only by reading will I find them, anyways, this is an absolute yes.
A Disappointing Dive into Harem Fantasy with an Unlikable Protagonist and Incoherent Narrative
I typically avoid harem-style books, but I don't believe they're inherently without merit. If approached with a logical, even scientific perspective (e.g., strong animals often have multiple mates due to evolutionary pressures), it's possible to create an engaging alternate world where humans follow similar patterns. Unfortunately, this book fails to deliver a compelling narrative or a likable protagonist, and suffers from an incoherent plotline.
The protagonist is transmigrated into a world where he has a unique system, locked until his 18th birthday. Despite the countdown indicating when it will be unsealed, he still expresses dissatisfaction with his current situation, unfairly blaming the system for his lack of strength and not having more wives. This is particularly off-putting considering his likely origin from a world similar to ours, where having multiple partners is not the norm. His dissatisfaction, when he already has at least two wives/concubines, is a clear sign of perverted greed.
In this world, attaining a Buddha-like status is assumed to be rare. However, even if this were true, it doesn't justify the protagonist's selfishness and lack of appreciation for what he has. His inability to value his current relationships and his constant desire for more make him an unsympathetic character that readers will struggle to root for.
The narrative also suffers from incoherence and inconsistency. The protagonist is supposedly a godly farmer, yet his farming skills are all battle-related. Instead of planting crops, he acquires plants that either grant him combat skills or function as weapons. The author provides him with a full set of armor and various weapons, which is nonsensical for a farmer character. Furthermore, the exaggerated names for his farming-based skills, such as Supreme Father, God of War, and Beast God, only add to the confusion and undermine the story's potential.
In conclusion, this book disappoints on multiple fronts: an unlikable protagonist, narrative inconsistencies, and an incoherent plotline. The exploration of harem dynamics is far from engaging, and I cannot recommend this read. My rating is a disheartening 0/10. (The actual rating is better, because the Translation Quality doesn't suck)
isnt this basically a cultivation version of overlord??