LordDragonMonarchRVz
In a site full of mostly Chinese novels, this is a breath of fresh air. Surprisingly the author isn’t racist toward the Japanese and you can tell he researched well because of all the mythology and spirits. It’s like cultivation in a modern world but a whole new game and different kind of levels. The translation and editing is some of the best I’ve seen in a while too. I hope this gets chosen, so please guys, give it a try.
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This is one of the best things I've read so far and yet it's only starting can't wait for it to be completed gonna be a masterpiece for sure❤️❤️❤️
nice story, at least the initial part. it looks predictable but i think author has more plans for the story, well this is my take on the story read this for something new.
I feel that this story doesn't have much of a plot. He is too OP at the beginning and I feel that there would be no point in reading. Sure if it was like Overlord it wouldn't be too bad, but no offence it just isn't that similar at all. Sorry, not my cup of tea.
The plot is extremely predictable and for me is boring in every way. Just reading this made me wanna puke, the characters are no joke retarded and overall this **** is hella cliche
(Story Development)The story development is far worse than what anyone ever says it is. About 150 chapters in, the MC is invincible and not even China’s government does anything about him. He also extorts China for useful minerals, information, and abuses his power. He then heads to find the “hidden sects” but already realizes he’s pretty much the best of the best in his generation. He then fights it out with another cultivator and falls off a cliff where his side chick and him have a little love time.(Character Design)Horrible. Absolute trash. Ning Qingxue (mc’s side girl) turns into a mindless love slave trying to find MC and almost gets herself killed most of the time. She **coincidently** finds a shadow of MC and another person fighting (the cliff area) and sees him fall off. SHE GOES INTO THE FOREST THAT IS BLOCKADED BY THE MILITARY TO TRY TO FIND THIS SLIVER OF HOPE HER YOUNG HERO IS THERE.If it wasn’t for the fact I wanted MC to find his master (girl) and tell her his feelings I would have never read past Chapter 100. Actually, I was hoping that Ning Qingxue died in the forest so we wouldn’t have to go through this and could finally let MC be a free man.(World Background)The whole story doesn’t make sense. At first, MC says the chi/qi is too thin on Earth and it’d be a miracle if you were to get to Chi Gathering 1 stage, but we clearly read that there are more powerful people than MC and they are 30 yrs old. ????????. (Writing Quality)1/5 - author don’t try to make a story like this again
Great piece good lines Waiting already covered the addicting chapters and really it's great thanks for the write up don't stop oo can't wait to c what next. U av up to ur sleeves
MC:do you believe that i can turn into a fish and slip in your vital yin?Girl:noMC:ok *poof* *MC turn into a fish*Girl:AH.......*moans*?????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????
The quality of translation of this dropped far too much the new group EndlessFantasy Translation ruined this novel and I can't recommend this story to anyone anymore.
The main character is actually likable and does it while ****** smart decisions without looking like a frigid ice cube. There doesn't seem to be romance(thank gosh) at the moment and the world she's in is developing nicely. I can't wait to see what else happens.
Its better than most novels on here but I would not call it a masterpiece. The writing is ok but nothing where I just want to keep reading. Its not immersive at all. I had to drop the novel at around Chapter 20 because reading the novel is just not engaging in my opinion.Kind of feeling bad to give this a negative review because you can see that the author put a lot of effort into his creation. But I just got bored. Its just not mine sorry.
