I can not believe I'm doing this. A 5 star by the author himself.I am a little bit lazy, but if I don't have the support I won't have the motivation to keep up uploading more chapters, I'm trying my best to make a great story.
First few chapters were a really hard to read for the mc’s personality to his mannerisms it makes me cringe just thinking about it. Author you should edit the first few chapters a bit if just totally change them.
The Good: A good xianxia without any useless fluff for the most part. Author puts in plenty of effort to keep the quality high and it shows! The Bad: The cultivation levels are very hard to follow, I personally don't like it when I have to take a mental note of the levels because they are not intuitive. A slow pace is good, but going too slow makes it a chore to keep up with. I personally don't feel anything unique from the MC or the world, I feel like a plain character was placed in a generic xianxia world instead of building the world around the character. Sorry if that doesn't make much sense. The Neutral: While this novel doesn't try anything new, I feel like the author is aware of that and plays to its strengths making it a very solid novel amongst a sea of cultivation novels. (Although the cultivation novel sea is many times smaller than the romance novel sea)
Honestly poor grammar/english and over use of the world "mam" really dont understand why. World building so far and character introductions are poor
INTERESTING!!!!!It's a plot that can make the readers hook. Firstly, I like the way the writer projected the story. I personally loved the sister, her way of living or her process of thinking is perfect. Secondly, I like how the character description is done equally to all the characters. Honestly I didn't feel any hassle while reading too. Overall, its a good book with a good amount of suspense element.Keep Going!!!
I thought it must be a isekai shit but no it's more than that. I really loved the narration style it's not your classic old school baritone but the urban touch is cool. I am really looking forward on reading the story. however I think the quality of literature can be a bit better.
F this NTR shit. Feels like I wasted my time reading up to now.
Best.... Fablous.... Wonderful... What a novel...its.. true story... Its.. amazing.....what a..book... Goodnovel...best novel.. of the year.... I hope.. thidls novel..is .. best novel of the year.... This is inspired to all man
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this is for the author!! r u going to continue this book?? I would like to see how it ends but I would hope that u dont just end it and keep it going for awhile then end it!! I would like to see the book fully written!!
The novel is so fucking stupid, and the fucking MC has shits for brain i mean god damn it how can some one be so dumb, the more i read this the more my IQ got low ......................................................................................................................
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