The synopsis leaves much to be desired. The exposition at the start of the first chapter feels a little too long but it's bearable. It reminds me of the common light novel trope of Hero vs Demon King. Lastly, the start feels slow compared to the premise of the novel. It likely would be more hooking if the start is a flashback of some sorts to a battle. An extra tidbit here: some descriptions of an object's external features feel half-done as I couldn't imagine it clearly
The storyline is amazing and so are the characters each unique in their own way. This book has great potential to become big!
This reminds me of the book Vita Nostra. Author have you perhaps read it?Writing is pretty good, obviously not many chapters so far but will be interesting to see where it goes.
Just came after reading chapter 21, ngl that was the best fight scene i've ever read bro. Author is cooking, if you keep the plot interesting them, i'm reading this book till the end
What to say author its good, too good whole day I wait for the new chapter like a diehard fan. everyone please give this novel a read its good
Really nice novel??? already loving it and will be waiting for more chapters
Pretty good start and the mc is very lazy but I do like the back and forth with his system. I'm looking forward to the reactions to the things he accomplishes. Keep those updates coming
This novel is a total gem! Shenlong’s journey from being labeled “trash” to uncovering his true power had me hooked from the start. The epic battles, ancient secrets, and his unstoppable determination make this an absolute must-read for any cultivation fan!
Spicy gem! ? Every quotes hits hard, perfect for reflecting on your role as the main character in life, esp if you've ever felt like a side character. A must read for self reflection and empowerment!! ??
Author's shameless review hereI'm not gonna lie. This book is an inspiration gotten from Jasmin Josef's Married to the Devils's Son and Ash_Knight's The Crowns Obsession. If you've read both books and love them, give this author a chance and check it out. Also, don't forget to leave a review too.
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This book is just the best?It has all the qualities of a good book With great twists and well executed rolls It excellent...Least I forget rate this book a 5 because it's the best you have read in a while..right?Anyways enjoyyyyyyyy