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Amazing world background and plot, the storyline was just so intriguing, it had me at the edge of my seat. The descriptions are so clear and the main character Qin has a lot of improvement. which leaves me excited
Yea I'm liking this book so far. It's one of the everyone gets transported to another world but the mc has some kind of cheat trope, but I believe that if you enjoyed "The World Online" then I think you will like this book just like me. I can't wait to read more so I hope this book will get picked, but it's webnovel so probably not
Just started reading the book and it's a good one. I love the handsome character with flowing white hair..
The book has potential and would surely reach places
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No real complaints here. I enjoy the story, and characters so far. The only real consistent issues I've seen are the author's troubles with subject-verb agreement and that they don't refer to who's speaking often enough. Other than those two quirks though, solid novel. I'm a fan of vampires so I'm interested to see where this goes. Keep it up, author!
Let me sort it out.
Writing: 4.5/5 (I am literally trash writing so it's actually good for me)
Plot: 10/5 (As for myself, i have never seen a plot this interesting. It's mixture of fantasy, horror, reality.)
Chapter potentials: 4.8/5 (It's almost like, you're standing on tip of a needle. Exciting)
Characters: 5/5 (Well explained characters and structured.)
World building: 4/5 The world is properly explained step by step in each chapters. Tho I'll like it if the author tried more to build up the world and ease it to readers.
Overall i give it this much..(☞ﾟ∀ﾟ)☞
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Very good story upload more chs
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Another shameless review form me, the author. Idk if this actually helps with reach, but I hope it does.
I won't actually be reviewing my own story since it would be most likely biased.
Hope you have fun time reading this story! <3