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Wonderful to have such an experience
Love this story! Cannot wait for it to be updated! Very interesting and captivating! Needs some corrections made in the writing but nothing so drastic that you can’t follow it.
I love the story so far but I am confused by the comments from the author at the end of last chapter posted. Is this the end of the story and how or were you just taking a break for awhile. Is it going into a part 2. Help!!!
Storyline was good. My only issues were character mixups and some grammatical errors. There was a James, Gertrude and Joana introduced to the story that didn’t belong because they were Paul, Herty and Rosa. Overall, I liked the story!
good story
The story changed to some other story before the book ended. So there was no ending to the story of Jaxon, Piper, and the Dark Moon Pack!!
great ......
great story!!
Amazing story.i love the writing style.
100 chapters 4-14-23
Mmm what are these women planning to do on behalf of their husbands.
omoooo ('-') /❤️ read this one guysssss! It's worth readingggggg! I really like the flow of the story! Cant wait to the next chapter!
