Writing this story has given me an outlet for my 'creativity', but mostly to escape reality. It is not because I am sad or depressed, it was just that it had been a good way to take a break from everything and have some fun with my imagination, while sharing it with others.
Snow fell gently from the sky, adding to the blanket of snow already formed on the ground. The leafless trees were covered in snow, and the icy flowers on the ground were buried within it. All in all, it was a beautiful and melancholic winter view.
"Tsk, who cares, I'm bad mood right now, I don't care if you're one of them or the one that sent them to me. Now, I'm still pissed, so let's fight!"
"Carrick Fortier; The Divine King of Blades."
Yun Shu frowned slightly.
ONE OF THE BEST ??? ART IS THE GOAT. What you’d think would be a typical reincarnation story turns out to be so much more complex, written beautifully!!
very nice novel, good start, great chapter lingth, promsing story, a cultivator in a mage world, would like to see more. now to the down side, hope other takes this a constrctive. 1. author tends to repeat things a bit, for example mc sais he likes something, then after saying he likes something, the author goes on to say mc sais he liked something bc he likes it. no need to say something and then go on to describe that he liked that thing, he already said so. but i admit it was more apprent in first chapters, it was a lot less in the middle chapters. 2. i would like more from the system, fir example he ask qustions, but we wtill dont know how to get SP, or how dual cultivation will work, does he need a skill book for that or just go at it, just more structer, and clearer progression path, as well as how he will devlope.
started pretty good but is losing momentum in the past 50 chapters. (reviewing this at chapters 140).The pace slowed down to a snail and author spend several chapters to write about daily life of mc (in novel time, not even a week went by in the past 60 chapters).and it's not even a high intensity arc. mc is just stopping by in a town, reading books and flirting around.I will give this a shot again when more chapters are release but I seriously hope author picks up the pace where the story moves forward each chapter. right now I feel like I can skip 10 chapters without missing anything relevant in the story.
Interesting idea and theme of story. I have been dreading to read something like this (TBH). Keep up the chapter pouring. But there's something I quite find a little bit error. 1. The Punctuation 2, Paraphasing. 3. the conversation. This book is a diamond needed to be polished to see it's potential:)
Actually Good, it's been a long time since I got interested in a novel. Nevertheless it's actually an interesting read, I really needed a break from those braindead fantasy novels and Edgelord MCs.
Story OK. To be fair the author did say its his first novel and he isn't a native English speaker. And it shows. Badly. I've dropped it. I rarely drop books just because of writing quality but I couldn't continue.This was as bad as mtl. The bad ones. BUT if you can handle mtl or are not a native speaker then this isn't really a problem. As this was also the authors first work, other problems such as story pacing, character progression, character interaction and behaviour all needs work. Theres a lot of telling and very little showing. This comes with practice, time and experience.My advise to the author as simply a fan of light novels is to read more well written English novels. Not translated, but actual English novels. You'll pick up a lot and it'll help you construct your novels better in tbe future.For anyone who read all this and want an actual review.. Transmigration story where male MC gets into modern world with monsters. System makes him cultivate stronger. For once the original body isn't some begger or poor son which is actually refreshing. It's why I think this author with some work and experience can actually write a good novel in the future.
Original story and idee but most characters have weird/unrealistic personalities that don't follow any logic like how his sister keeps loving him without any reason for it or how even though he is this super strong and charismatic demon but can't even join a simple group to complete a maze and looking down on the people around you is not a reason to not adept to the situation that is not pride but ignorance. ps: typos in almost all chapters can easily be dealt with if you at least read what you are typing.ps ps : I am on chapter 42