can't believe it's a first time author very well developed world characters and power system keep it up, its my daily read now so in the future i may even get some priv chappys!
Not bad...the fact that it's free may or...... may not have influenced my rating slightly but who cares ....................................................
Read 20 chaoters : The premise and concept of this novel is good and well written. The only thing I can't accept is the author's blatant use of words which are contradictory.1) He tells the 5 year kid is as mature as a youngster then that means he should be as matured as an adult when he turns 10.But the author writes that Belle and MC plays around when she visits him.?. Does this mean they are doing some adult stuff playing ?? They should compete with each other to check their progress as Belle is too competitive as said by author but nope they play around.2) Dragon in this world lays very small eggs and two dragons come out of a single egg as they are twin and they simply bond with each of the MC and Belle.THICC Plot armor.3) The author does not know about cause and effect. He writes whatever he wishes and events happens without any cause and consequences.4) Nobody wanna kill/harm/kidnap MC. Only the dark alliance wants it and rest all wanna worship mc as god.5)He is as mature as a youngster but cant say no to Belle cause his Body is still a KID.6) Everything happens in favor of mc (THICC PLOT ARMOR).He is a happy go lucky naive kiddo with maturity.I hate reading story where everything is smoothsailing for mc who is naive idiotic but author keeps portraying him as intelligent and mature. This makes the story a FAIRY TALE and I have grown up from Fairy Tales.There is no suspense and thrill in reading fairytales. So If you like Fairytales this novel is for you. Alas its not for me.
So... it may seem like a typical isekai story on the surface, but then, I can sense that there are some unique spins on this genre. Being reborn in a game that's about to end its service seems like a nice touch. I can't wait to see how this will all unfold.
Same First Story on all cultivation novel. Childhood gal ruing their marriage something. A good for nothing boy who are weak. Powerfull family. Bullying. Faceslapping. And more of it. Typical MC background.
Going off the first few chapters, this is top notch. Well done. The writing is great, the grammar is solid, the description is legitimate, and it is a smooth yet easy read. Well done author, I feel like I am experiencing a new universe when I am reading this.
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If you wanr your brain to leave this planet, this is definitely the story for you.Mc is the most dumbest person yoh will read about so far.
This novel is good. With a wonderful mc it really gives perspective to what a real harem owner should be like. And he gets really over powered. And author where is the fire when you started writing please update the novel
A nice change on several tropes of the cultivating gamelit genres.Still bothered by the design mistake in the toaster for the cover.And I need extra words for 140 characters.
!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!Bad translation !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
this is such a good novel y was this not selected, even tho it is similar but the writing style till chapter 40 is sooo good why do people have such bad tastes ???????????????????????????????