Hello! This is the author making a personal review.As of this time, I think my writing quality is still good but not perfect, you know? It sometimes get dialogue-heavy and personally while I don't dislike it, a semi-paragraph can feel overwhelming for a webnovel.For story development, I am content. But I do feel like I'm not good at certain transitions.In terms of update stability, character design, and world background. Perfect! Cause, why not?Personally there are still so many things to write and this simple review will not deep dive on those (read my novel... please...).By the way, to those reading this.Thank you for atleast checking out my novel.I am beyond grateful.
please don't drop the book it's so hard to find a good one to read and I have been enjoying this one thoroughly. if it gave me an option I would've sent some golden tickets your way .I really hope to see everything work smoothly for Randy and Liz maybe a few more girls?
sorry y'all. can't post. I have some mental problems
even though I haven't read yet but it's looks interesting
The grammar error kind of frustrating.
I enjoy the book. I will keep reading. Though my imagination, I wish to see the imagination version of NASA in those spaceship. Don't add too much pure science. I hate smoking my brain trying to figure out a whole new field of work.
Review after chapter 217.Overall the novel and it's progression is good. However, there are a few quirks.Firstly, his background on earth is not defined or limited. For example, what year did he leave earth? How much knowledge does he really have about weapon making? Is he genius enough to create new futuristic technology without any assistance?Next the gun strength seems a bit off. However, that can be fixed by explaining why each gun can kill specific ranks of beasts or humans. Additionally, the limits and reason for things can be defined a bit better. For example, why certain technology exists in a country, but the rest of technology is pretty archaic. Or why someone had a specific type of technology but people above him do not have similar advanced tech.Most importantly, the story needs an editor. The English is good enough to get across the story, however, the errors definitely break immersion.This story could jump to a 4.5 and top rated novel if the previous and future chapters are edited. Keep up the work!
An 8/10—a powerful story woven with love, loss, betrayal, and revenge. Amiyah’s journey from vulnerability to empowerment is captivating. The author crafts an emotional and suspenseful narrative, bringing to life the complexities of grief, courage, and strength. This novel has real potential and showcases the author’s talent for creating intense, relatable characters and unexpected twists. A must-read for fans of drama and suspense!"
It looks like the author has great direction and drive for this story. POV switches are well on-point with each perspective not being wasted on characters and that the story progresses well under a well written world. Not to mention that the writing quality is highly commendable, I can see this novel going up in a few months time. Keep it up author!
kilometers and deliver the probe into the wormhole and return back!
"Hah, I know that, I read in a book, he said, about 40% of human children are toxid children, but since the emergence of TIKTOG organizations, toxid children started to appear everywhere and began to rise istantly to 70%," said Mamat proudly.
Never! Never! Never!