Excellent book I really enjoyed it
This is good and I love how Emily’s story is going
is this book abandoned?
Ang ganda ng story ninyo po...️...️
best book of the series yet
interesting story line... but what's up with updates?
The story is really interesting. I am really sad about the protagonist. l am really curious about the next chapter.
It's so amazing
It captivated me right from the beginning
Thank you, everyone for reading my book, silent readers please drop your reviews❤❤???
Beautiful writing, can't wait for more.
this story is really good
In this world where people's minds are somewhat askew, our protagonist steps in. Some mysterious drugs or local mushrooms grant everyone a "noble madness," causing them to believe that the entire world revolves around nobility or royalty. The affected individuals seem to be reincarnated parasites, contributing little beyond creating chaos, which they then attempt to resolve or pass on to others. The mix of melodramatic scenes, often mishandled and exacerbated by irrational character actions, further complicates matters, possibly due to the influence of the mushrooms hindering rational thought.
At first, the MC maintains a tenuous grip on sanity. However, as chapters progress, the MC succumbs to the noble madness, losing their ability to think independently. The story drifts aimlessly towards the realm of this distorted reality.
The inconsistencies in plot development and world-building flaws accumulate, forming numerous plot holes. The author tries to fix these issues, but like a never-ending cycle of software patches, each solution creates new problems. Starting from around chapter 150, the author's coherence deteriorates, with hallucinations filling the narrative without regard for the overarching plot, making it difficult to fully immerse oneself in the story.
Conclusion:
World-building: 1 out of 10 (plentiful plot holes, characters' obsession with nobility is absurd).
Characters: 8 out of 10 (a few stand out despite the overall issue).
Story progression: 1 out of 10 (author's decline leads to an unsatisfying reading experience, with the narrative losing coherence).