Had a lot of potential, but have either been dropped or on hiatus....................
Author, with all honesty, your English is horrendous. You might not realize it, but the way you write is very confusing and many words are unnecessary.If u need me to list examples, I'll do so with a correction too. But I ignored that, since if I like a novel I'll read despite the hurdles. As for the story, nothing really original fyi tbh.. not that it's bad, I don't mind it. But everything is way too rushed, he becomes lvl 10 when everyone is 2&1, he doesn't even struggle killing the boss announced globally, just slash and hack, no dodge, no low health.. nothing no struggle. again, lvl2 vs lvl 15! And the CEO of the gaming company is kind to him, only kind. Yes, he offered on the phone to buy him a house, cars, pets, jets, guns and the world? And he did, the most expensive too! it's like he had a son that he now remembers? and when knowing the MCs linage(warring states era's leading martial linage), he starts crying thanking God for letting him know that the one they should serve is alive??? A cult?hmm.. What is this nonsense, seriously?.. he made 2 million $ or wtv in 2/3 days? If weed knew this, he would start killing left and right, kill himself at the end, revive, kill himself again, a loop. Oh and supposedly this isn't a harem okay? Fine even better. But noo, it can't be that dream novel?? where there's no actual harem, right!!!!??Yep u guessed right. No harem. But u look right, there's a girl "oh my so hot and cool, can I have a screenshot?" Everytime. Then left, oh not surprisingly another girl?!?? "sooo rich and handsome, if only I could marry him I will forever be happy". Idk wtv doesn't suit my taste, author I hope you improve and I sincerely urge you to check up on earlier chapters every now and then and not neglect keeping them up to date with your improvement. Reached chapter 20, couldn't continue on my injured soul.. good luck!
Really enjoying this one. The author has a fantastic imagination and this really comes through in his world building. Love the futuristic fictional world he has painted here. Really brings everything alive, like watching a well-done sci-fi series. The protagonist is well-developed and you really come to care for him, and the supporting cast all seem colorful and unique, further adding to the authenticity of this work. Finally, the fight scenes are really well done and had me on the edge of my seat. This is certainly a series I will follow. Already added it to my library. Very enjoyable.
The whole novel so far could be summed up in one word, amusing. I do however feel kinda bad for our MC, like... really bad.Go a little easy on him... er... her
No originality. MC gets ****ed by his own clan stories get boring. If you want to be a hit them come up with something different. Stop following in others foot steps blaze your own path. The summary already tells me the whole God damn story.
fantastic story. i am sad that this is paused or discontinued, i really loved the concept here and enjoyed the story a lot. i gope the author returns to this story some day.
Well the novel has a lot of potencial, but the writing needs a little bit of work. So I'll continue reading and I hope for regular updates I would like that all of the history to have some logic behind too.
Yuri is enough to hook me up... Other than update others are really good. Just pls don't drop it as I suffered so much from dropped novels I like... :')
like the novel keep it up ,,,just chapters are less ...thanks for righting//////////////////////////............................................................
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I've been waiting for months for atleast a single release and look what I got, its just depressing that one of my first and favorite novel actually died. The novel is good with one of the best plots or story I've ever seen, its a pity that the translator no longer releases chapters anymore as this was actually in my list of top 5 novels. All in all, I suggest you don't read this as it just makes you sad and annoyed (lol jk read it I recommend you do) the story is good and thats it, there are many more good aspects in this novel but Im too lazy. That's all.
Hi! This is kera, an editor of the international writing contest SWA II. I believe your book has great potential, so I invited you to join in a week ago. Please reply to me so I can discuss this with you in detail.