Please get it selected
A MC that actually feels competent to me. Sadly it won’t get picked because people like and pay for bad novels. Filler jekfidodkdkddffffdfrdffgggfff
I'm not a fan of gaming but your book illustrates the settings, thoughts and emotions of the players all too well. It reminds me of The King's Avatar movie. I don't have background knowledge for gaming so reading the first part confuses me at first. But as I read on, it gets better and you depicted it well. Nice job author!
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Great!
The way it was written is just great. It's like riding a bus of questions. Be they words or characters. Be they events or the readers. All will search for answer. This book is quite similar to Moriarty the Patriot, I like it. Great job madame. Do keep on writing and updating~
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I'm enjoying this work .. ..with good approach in character psychology ... Just little confused by world background, I'm having a hard time to imagine it. .. Anyway thank you
It's a pretty cool twist on history mixed with sci-fi stuff. I do like how you build the world the story takes place and the characters are well-written, well-balanced, and well-fleshed out. It's an interesting premise executed very well and I do believe this is a book I would recommend to sci-fi fans. Great work!
This story is very interesting..this reflects how creative the mind of the writer is..though it is not complete yet but I really enjoy the story and I am waiting for the next chapter to be uploaded...
It's rare to come across stories written in first person's point of view. It's a great gamble and a challenge on its own.
I like how the author has brought out the emotions of the characters. The story has the ability to grip your attention and make you want to read more and more.
Overall, the story is good. Keep up the good work author!
Trash. Gets a talent that essentially makes him immortal. So what class does our MC choose? Naturally defensive warrior because obviously maximizing the damage of his character that is already undying would be stupid. Its much better to go with a class that lacks damage, range and aoe because why not right?
Was enjoying the story, only because it is entertaining but then the original author became an idiot out of nowhere lol he just won the UCL and is 99.99% going to win the Ballon and what does the author do??? Force thr mc to join a Europa league team lol he is wasting a season to join a garbage team. I wish I never wasted my time reading so many chapters lol because it ended up being a drop