it should be a good story with wonderful potential Mc brings down the quality by a lot and made me feel like it needed veteran webnovel reader patience to read 50 chapters it felt like author tried to flesh put characters but ended up with more issues...like isekaied mc needed a sword to tell him how a system workedfuturistic fantasy world with magic and technology but no DNA test or blood rituals for paternity...characters too are flawed like first thought on seeing an albino kid is adultery.. on a noble family matriarch who then proceeds to weep like a maid and abuse the kid for 9 yrsthere are other things like authors attempt at mother pov to make it more reasonable..but the attempts to whitewash his mother and sister is even more forced..an s class lvl sister who silently watched the abuse for some unfathomable reason even if u can tolerate all these then mc helps by being so annoying for a supposedly 23 yr old dude with mental age of 16 by acting 7 dude has good powers which is basically equivalent exchange (sacrifice) can get op if he had more than 2 brain cells and stoppp3d whiningread at your preference coz honestly good story with development potential..but author seems to want to focus on family drama part
amazing, I love dual cultivation stuff ?
I like this story .its so captivating and inspiring
Came from tiktok as a big fan of this guy, read the novel and as a guy who's been writing novels here for almost an year now, I can definitely say this is better than 80% of what this platform has to offer, a very good job at it.Something I would say not as a criticism but as an advice from someone who's experienced on this platform, is the title. It isn't bad. It's actually quite good.Though WN favors clickbait titles like I'm the strongest and others so that's that.Besides that, great job fr
12 chapters in and I'm hooked. Lots of mysteries to unravel.
I will seeking for more episodes ...classic story... carry on genius! ♥️
The book is good but it hasn't been updated in months ?. Whyyyyyyyy?Please update it so that I can read, okay?It's taken so long ??????? Author please don't disappoint me, it's my favorite story so far
Definitely a good fan fiction !A must read!!The mc is cool and unique I really enjoyed reading and the storytelling was both powerful and beautifully written
Chapter 1-26 [Review]Good Things- A Simple StoryYou should always strive to create and inovate new stories but sometimes trying to make something new won't be any good, this story goes back to the basics of the classic high school harem troupes.- Good Quality WritingIgnoring the length of the chapters, the writing isn't bad or displeasing. It is enjoyable. Bad Things- Short ChaptersFor some reason the author decided to create each chapter for one event making it vary in length.
IT WAS SO GOOD. Story was good, characters are good, everything is just good. I'm so proud of you <3. Imma need some more chapters though.
5. Human genius (Immortal)
Never! Never! Never!