First off, I wanna say that the grammar is good! There are some misses here and there but they don't really affect reading experience.
Now for the story. I quite like the slow burn romance on this one. The MC and the FL are well defined imo. Sure this might be kinda slow to some but I like the pacing very much.
Finally, I just want to laugh at the people complaining that the MC is a wimp. It makes sense that someone'll be disoriented if they suddenly get placed in an environment they're not used to. Plus at the later chapters, after he fully acclimatized to his new environment, well let's just say that the Princess isn't teasing him anymore, or can't rather :)
Overall, good stuff
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Good to read
Great story development
Good writing
Waiting for new chapter.............................
Release fast please....................
It's a pretty good book, there's nothing wrong with trying to read this book. Maybe you will like this book after you read it
Keep the spirit for the author!
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not bad, have read all 25 current finished chapters and they look banger, a lot of foreshadowing and storylines even from start of novel makes this novel potentially on level of Lotm
One more review closer to extra chaps :). Anyways check out the review by Bird of Paradise which basically drew me into this novel.
From the first chapter it hooks you in, and the further you read, the more the novel coils it’s slippery grasp around you.
I’ll definitely be following this novel closely. Goo job author!
The story and world building is good and the updating is regular, the writing quality is amazing and the character design is good and the plot is interesting
Read this book and give me all your comments the story is a realistic story that repeated itself in various conservative villages this story happened in most remote places whereby villagers still love talking about various issues while others gossip a lot.
I hope many authors are inspired to make MCs like ff this.... Because most of them often make typical Japanese beta MCs that are annoying. ?????????????????????????????