Warning!! This is BL!! That said it is a cute and funny read. If you like BL you will like this story.
It seems kingdom building or self cultivation or i dunno. Cant seem to comprehend the nature but nonetheless its worth a read. Keep up the good work.
This is more of a question than a review. I read many novels on this app and I just cannot stand bad grammar.Im on chapter 5 and i wanna ask if the writing gets at least a little better cause if not, then im afraid i will have to drop this.(im not an english speaker myself so i understand some errors, i probably messed up something in my review as well, but just cant stand first chapters)
Please are you going to continue the story??
The story was very interesting but all the stupidity of the author is ingrained into the novel later on. I'm not reading this novel to listen to your delusional opinions and racism. I don't care what you think but this just shows the author only thinks about his own country and the others are just random trash on the road. The author is just a kid who didn't get his candy. His ideal world is one which only contains a certain country's people as rulers and others as slaves. Only a poor education system gives birth to such individuals. Please wake up Mr. author, this is not your daydream.
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I dont get why ppl were complaining abt how the MC was nerfed in the story, this at first led me to not wanting to read it but i buckled down and read it, the story actually tellls u why he was nerfed and if u dont get the reason why he was nerfed then dude/ette u will need to get ur brain checked. Other than that, I found no problems with the writing quality or anything for that matter wrong with it except the part where the MC doesn't want to read through his predecessors knowledge bcuz he fears he will lose himself which seems like a pretty dumb reason when he could die at any moment if he gets caught or lacks a certain skill or piece of knowledge that could get him out of that situation.
This story begin with a very OP Mc who can summon high level creature and litteraly the definition of OP characters but this is not really a problem for me. They are a lots of novels with OP Mc who is pleasure for reading.
The mc class is summoner
good novel, at first I did not give much faith, since it had a few bad reviews, but the only thing I can say is that I do not regret giving it a try, if you want to compare this story with another as a guide I would say that the profane prince, but obviously different, obviously recommended and as you can see the story has for many chapters yet, we just have to hope that the author never leaves us like most :( **: I would like you to be able to better describe the characters since the spoken features are very Lazy and we don't have enough to imagine them, it would also be nice if you at least gave each girl a name, even if you only name her once because everything is like saying mmm very empty
This is such a messed up novel, I didn't understand anything....clearly I am yo dumb for this one good lick other readers. Will not recommend to others
La historia en Contexto general parece buena pero tiene muchas deficiencias, si el autor Lee esto por favor considere lo para mejorar la historia(opinion personal)
*el primer capitulo esta muy Mal escrito y acelerado, y es casi innecesario el desarrollo del personaje que muere al segundo siguiente
*No se da una descripcion de los personajes buena en un inicio, aunque el autor Plantea hacerlos acorde al publicó pero es muy demorado seria mejor describirlos desde el inicio como son para imaginarlos
*hay muchas cosas sin sentido
1. Se lesiono y al Dia siguiente estaba bien?
2. Tuvo una transformacion y no se sorprende?
3. Ni siquiera empieza a cultivar un poco para tener Fuerza siendo asesino?
4.no parece asesino en su personalidad... Aunque no es necesario personalidad generica pero normalmente se culpe bien el papel teniendo en cuenta lo que hacen
Bueno eso es todo como datos que vi que podian arreglar ahora que apenas empieza la historia, pero espero ver Mas contenido